Short story stubs part 2

[lokmarie]

Comments

[msteatime]

Woah, it's like a sci fi creation myth...
Interesting...

[gilderfreak]

yo me gusto mucho. needs character development and a little more description/back story. Has great potential.
Is the believer supposed to be "god" and the other guy the "devil"?

[gilderfreak]

or is it more like, believer = quetzalcoatl and other guy = tezcatlipoca?

[lokmarie]

Thank you!:)
yeah,I usually do short stories before developing them into the full thing.
No, that was not my intent, though I wonder how it would be if interpreted that way...