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lola_9

Fire on the Wall [03]

Jul 15, 2011 00:30

Fire on the Wall

Pairings: GDTOP , DaeRi
Genre: Action, Adventure, Sci-fi, General
Overall Rating: R
Summary: 2503. Planet earth is divided into two sides, separated by a wall. As a last, desperate effort, Sector 17 sends a group of troops to invade the other side to look for water. But what first appears as a simple mission, becomes harder than ( Read more... )

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lola_9 July 15 2011, 11:32:04 UTC

אפילו לא קראת את ההקדשה שלי.

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miracleshining July 14 2011, 21:53:01 UTC

This is a fascinatingly structured piece of literature. I can't really call it fan fiction because it really stands independently on it's own, which makes it that more engaging. I'm still playing catch-up but I like the premise and the general idea behind this story.

I look forward to more of the updates, thank you!

lola_9 July 15 2011, 11:35:18 UTC

Thank you!

Nah, it's still a fanfiction, because I can't really think of any other characters fitting so well into those roles. :)

Oh, if you don't understand a thing or two, or need to ask anything at all, I'm here! :3
I know my writing is confusing sometimes, I apologize! In the end, everything will make sense, I promise! :)

kutunakal July 15 2011, 04:12:08 UTC

Waaaaaaaaaaaah.. I'm happy that you are back.. You don't know how much I re-read Savage and prayed that you will write another story, hahhhaaa..

This story is interesting, and I'm glad you decide to re-write and continue this.. Please updateeee... I can't wait!*excited

lola_9 July 15 2011, 11:38:19 UTC

Haha, Thank you so much!
I didn't know somebody liked Savage so much to re-read it.
All the fun that I had while writing Savage is nothing compare to this fic, since it's full of intrigues and schemes and secrets.
I'm trying my best to make sure you discover this world next to Seunghyun, and I guess it's a little frustrating... since I already know everything. XD

I'll update as soon as I can (probably next week. (: )

kutunakal July 15 2011, 11:51:34 UTC

Whaaaaaat? That was like... one of my favorite fic ever!! I was almost dead when you did not updated it for a looooong time.. I hope that doesn't happen to this one.. ^^

That's one advantage being a reader, we don't get to know what happen next.. But however, being a writer is more amazing than being a reader.. I always envy you writer.. :)

Aaaaargh, can't wait for an update... >.

lola_9 July 16 2011, 14:38:30 UTC

You can also write! :D Anybody can write!
That's just the thing about writing, all you need is an idea. The rest comes by itself once you start.

:) I'm sure you'll stay tuned! It's just a few days away!

spot! dyealer July 15 2011, 04:49:26 UTC

I dont mind long fics! =DDD

maybe you should name it?IDK...

your writing are always amazing...I fell in love with it!

what happen throughout SeungHyun being 'black out'..and I agree with SeungHyun an angry looking JiYong really look like a girl!!He is sooo cute!! =3

will be waiting for an update!

Re: spot! lola_9 July 15 2011, 11:43:10 UTC

I think I'll just name them in parts.
Thank you for commenting. I get so much strength and inspiration from you since you always write a comment. *cries and bows*

Angry looking Jiyong

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Re: spot! dyealer July 16 2011, 00:20:33 UTC

I am in a total agreement with you about JiYong..it seems so impossible but then haters can be quite surprising neh?

and I am really glad that you think like that about my comments! -cries- but your writing is good how can I NOT do that?!

Re: spot! lola_9 July 16 2011, 17:46:42 UTC

*blushes*
Stop it, I'm really flattered! :3

la_geni July 15 2011, 08:38:13 UTC

I LOVE THIS. I LOVE LOVE IT.

lola_9 July 15 2011, 11:44:10 UTC

And I love you for commenting!

Wait for an update next week! I promise to be quick! <3