SPN Fic: "The Professionals"

[lolaann1]

Title: The Professionals
Summary: Outsider POV. The guys visit a pharmacy after Dean gets injured on a hunt. Of course, their visit is a memorable one. Set in S3.
Rating: PG-13 for language
Characters/Pairings: Sam, Dean (no pairings)
Genre:  gen
Wordcount: ~2,700

A/N:  I've been wanting to do an outsider POV fic for a while and I've always loved fics

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

Oh, hugs for pharmacy guy at the end!

GREAT outsider POV! Loved this!

Having Hendricks at the end was inspired :)

[lolaann1]

Thanks :) Glad you enjoyed.

[lalablue]

Really liked the story. Very amusing. One small thing, this is first POV, not 2md. 2nd POV is say "you don't regret your decision" verus "I don't regret my decision." None the less still a really good story.

[lolaann1]

Yeah, thanks I'll fix that. I meant 'outsider POV' in my head, but that didn't quite make it onto the screen. Glad you enjoyed.

[antrazi]

Nice, I have a thing for Outsider POV.
This mkes a great anecdote: Still alive because of 100 Grand candy bars

[lolaann1]

Thanks :) I like outside POVs too. I always thought the candy bar that Sam gave Dean in A Very Supernatural Christmas looked like a 100 Grand bar... of course I may be biased since that's one of my favs.

[zara_zee]

This was awesome! Really enjoyed the outsider POV, and the scenario was just so believable. The voices were perfect too!

[lolaann1]

Thanks! :D

[tifaching]

Ahaha! Dean's ass bone is broken! LOL, LOL. And only family can wear on your last nerve the way those two were doing. Also Henrikson really is always angry.

Oh, this was perfection. Poor, poor pharmacy guy!

[lolaann1]

Thank you. People arguing and bitching at eachother (with a broken ass bone) probably shouldn't be considered 'fun' but I'm glad someone else agrees :D