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lomonaaeren

Chapter Four of 'A Reckless Frame of Mind'- Visiting Hours

Jul 31, 2007 12:19

frames of mind series, a reckless frame of mind

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ravenqueen55 July 31 2007, 19:48:08 UTC

Beautiful. Wonderfully lovely description of the landscape of a soul. I like how the plot is progressing and I'm thrilled that Draco knows something's not right...Go Draco, go!!!

lomonaaeren August 1 2007, 19:26:26 UTC

Thank you! That soul-description part comes the closest to my imagining of what a soul would actually look like.

Draco may change his mind once the curse catches up with him.

mugal July 31 2007, 20:18:17 UTC

*shudder*

lomonaaeren August 1 2007, 19:26:34 UTC

Why?

darkmoona July 31 2007, 21:57:31 UTC

It's so incedibly frustrating to read this story, cause everything that poor Harry says just get misunderstood and makes you wanna shout at everyone and say: "HEY! Can't you see it's a curse!! Stupid people!!" ut then you remind yourself of the nature of the curse and, of course, you undestand that it's really not their fault. Arrrrghhhh!!!!

lomonaaeren August 1 2007, 19:27:27 UTC

Hee. The situation is frustrating, I know, but I did mean the reader's reaction to echo Harry's frustration, so, well, thank you for feeling it. <3

oops_in_the_apt July 31 2007, 22:31:34 UTC

That was *so* very well written. Souls seem very pretty through your eyes!

I’m sure that’s just the temptation Potter needs to climb out of his madness, Draco thought, irritated. A red-haired fan sniffing up his crotch.

This made my day.

lomonaaeren August 1 2007, 19:27:47 UTC

Thank you!

Draco may be more jealous of Ginny than he knows...

humangps1 July 31 2007, 23:14:02 UTC

Hello! lol this is damedbx in the wrong account...BUT I copied and pasted ch. 3 and 4 with everything about who wrote and such and such. it will be re published anywhere on the net. just for online reading. it will be burned...LOL Crazy me. LOL Sorry, had lunatic thoughts...XD

Alas, I shall be reading offline. Will be back for the review. I can't wait to read it! XD

lomonaaeren August 1 2007, 19:28:06 UTC

Thanks! I hope you enjoyed it.

humangps1 August 4 2007, 21:19:44 UTC

OMG!! I DID! it was so ######' awesome! i did the same with ch. 5. I can't wait to read the rest. OMG! DRACO! LOL he is so brillant in your fics. I love your point of view of him. He tries and tries, and it seems he doesn't want to stop! LOL

Poor Harry ;_;

Brillant just brillant. XD