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Chapter Seven of 'A Potion Named Desire'- Slips

Jan 11, 2008 14:41

an intellectual love affair series, a potion named desire

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sofiaottoman January 11 2008, 19:53:23 UTC

So Harry fears his lack of control of his magic, that is what he most dislikes about himself? Or maybe it's his emotions and that he cannot control them though that smacks of Voldemort. Hmm...

Brilliant chapter. There was so much going on in it.

lomonaaeren January 12 2008, 15:01:03 UTC

Hmmm indeed. :)

And thank you! I wanted to make sure the story wasn't always about brewing.

lordes October 23 2010, 15:24:33 UTC

Omg, and now that I've figured part of it out myself, people comment with ideas!

*facepalm*

♥

dysonrules January 11 2008, 20:05:12 UTC

Cordelia scares the utter crap out of me.

Wooo, groveling Harry! Can't wait. Draco had to have known that would happen, but I suppose he couldn't have warned Harry without letting on that he was being a sneaky Slytherin...

So much sneakiness and secrets in this one!

lomonaaeren January 12 2008, 15:01:35 UTC

Really? I thought she wouldn't, just because Draco is less afraid of her in this chapter.

Yes, Draco's hair being full of potion is really his own fault. :)

And thank you!

dysonrules January 14 2008, 15:49:26 UTC

Hmmm, I think it's Draco's lack of fear that is making me nervous. For some reason it seems like a very very very bad idea to underestimate her.

thrnbrooke January 11 2008, 20:45:12 UTC

Fantastic chapter!

lomonaaeren January 12 2008, 15:01:53 UTC

Thank you!

sorringmay January 11 2008, 21:40:53 UTC

Still am not sure what Harry's potion is for and am looking forward to seeing what it is. I have a few ideas but just when I think I have it, you write something that make me question...

Cordelia on the other hand is just freaky, I'm almost scared for Draco.

lomonaaeren January 12 2008, 15:02:25 UTC

Well, to be honest, there are several ways the clues could connect, so I'm not surprised people are having a hard time.

And Cordelia is meant to be freaky.

anonymous January 11 2008, 21:56:40 UTC

Brilliant chapter.

"Harry was startled when fingers brushed the nape of his neck, in the same place he’d first touched Hermione. He glanced back and saw Malfoy just withdrawing his hand, face pale and neutral as a cloud.

“I’ll come back on Tuesday, then,” he said, with a small nod, and departed."

That part was amazing. As well as the explanation for it later.

It's also fascinating to follow Draco's mechanisms of thought with Cordelia and with Harry.

It makes me laugh, though that Draco is furious at being splashed on, when it happened indirectly because of him! Could have warned Potter, but he was curious to see how he would react without his potion. Well, now he has potion in his hair. *snickers*

Nimue

lomonaaeren January 12 2008, 15:03:01 UTC

Thank you!

And yes, poor Draco. He really should have told Harry about forgetting his potion right away if his appearance is that important to him. :)