my short story for lit

[lonelyscars]

anyone in a sophomore lit class at athenian knows what this story is for. i don't really like it but it wanted to be posted. it has problems still both gramatical and in the story it's self. I don't really care about it so unless someone has nothing to do don't bother telling me what's wrong with it. here it is

Comments

[luvin_legolas]

I *really* liked it. A lot.

i heart it

[marsh_mahlow]

i love your story rosie!!!

[lonelyscars]

thank you....both of you...

[dorymew]

Due to my short attention span, I read the first three paragraphs and the last paragraph. They were all four quite nice, and I'm sure the filling was good too.