Ye Olde Concrit Post

Think I'm doin' it wrong? Think I'm doin' it right? Comments on characterization, voice, writing, and whatnot can be left here. Comment screening is on, etc., etc.

I reserve the right to comment back (or not) and to take suggestions or not, but I can assure that I am not put off or offended by earnest critique.

( Lavi's last experience before Nuadoria | SPOILERS FOR DGM CHAPTER 202 )

჻ CHARACTER Lavi
჻ CANON SERIES D. Gray-man
჻ TIMELINE Mid-chapter 202, just after he learns about the parasites.

( Info in this post will be updated as new canon becomes available. This information is FOR META KNOWLEDGE ONLY unless your character has a specific way to know about it in game. )

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( Die Gestalt )