Post in me to critique this lj. What am I doing wrong? What am I doing right? What would you like to see more of?

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[ Sora's got the hang of this communicator thing because the feed comes up with no problem. Characters are given an amazing view of this, fangs and all. Don't worry, there's an explanation coming. ]Hey you guys, look! I look cool, right? I wore this all the time in Halloween Town. But I always wondered why I had fangs when I didn't use them ( Read more... )

What am I supposed to do? Is it this? Or this? Uh--

[ The video feed continuously goes on and off, but the sound is still there. It appears that Sora is struggling to use the communicator effectively. After more video failure because he's messing with everything, the video feed comes on again and stays on! Sora looks a little confused and unsure, ( Read more... )

hi! please remove this journal from your flists as it will be recycled pretty soon!