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First fanfic in... SEVEN years?

Jul 03, 2011 22:36

Title: Training Sessions
Author: loonylupinlover
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5386
Characters: Charles/Erik
Warnings: Pretty fluffy stuff all around. Innocent metal objects may be destroyed.
Summary: In which tea is spit out, zippers are mutilated, and sex with mutant powers is awesome.
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Comments 39

tolerik July 11 2011, 10:59:05 UTC

Loved this! Bottom!Erik is a favourite of mine ;) And I applaud the way you very deftly made him vulnerable and shy without letting him slip out of character.

Favourite line:

***Erik is alternately clumsily gentle and aggressively fierce, a byproduct of limited experience in the physical and no experience in the emotionally intimate.***

loonylupinlover July 11 2011, 16:06:14 UTC

Thank you! Bottom!Erik's a favorite of mine as well. I know the fandom seems to go for Charles as the bottom the majority of the time, but I think Charles is the one who'll have had more experience and who'll feel more comfortable in bed. Whereas in my head/in the movieverse, Erik has spent rather the vast majority of his adult life hunting down and killing people, with only awkward one-night stands or prostitutes to work with. Hence my characterization of him.

Awwww thank you! That's a very lovely compliment and one of my favorite lines as well :)

chica_charlie July 11 2011, 12:43:50 UTC

Omg, that was incredible. Definitely bookmarking that to re-read, and I for sure wouldn't mind if you happened to keep writing them on a regular basis. :D *______* This was beautiful, and so very hot. Unf.

loonylupinlover July 12 2011, 06:17:19 UTC

Thank you! I'll have to see what I can come up with ;)

confusedkayt July 11 2011, 12:53:27 UTC

OH MY GOD. HOT LIKE BURNING. This was so well done! The thinking in it - the really fun and layered approach toward Charles' thought processes - was as awesome as the pron. :)

loonylupinlover July 12 2011, 06:16:29 UTC

Thank you! XD As much as I love hot man sex, I love hot man sex with MUTANT POWERS even more, and I'm glad that came through!

floatxxaway July 11 2011, 16:11:49 UTC

Oh gosh, I don't even know how I can form coherent words right now. So incredibly hot! And so wonderfully written! I love this. <3

katefish_617 July 11 2011, 17:58:53 UTC

great story!! I really loved the end!