Comments | lordsmoothbutt: Poem

lordsmoothbutt

Nov 23, 2005 16:40

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willingwin November 23 2005, 22:09:57 UTC

First, there's nothing like a poem that contains the word "shit", lol.

Second, it was great until the end. Then it was just depressing as hell.

lordsmoothbutt November 23 2005, 22:57:24 UTC

I think the word "shit" adds a bit of class to the composition.

Sorry about the whole ending thing, but that's how it goes sometimes, lol

willingwin November 23 2005, 23:38:10 UTC

Yeah I know how it is.

darkxslayer November 24 2005, 00:31:22 UTC

Awwww.....will you marry me?

lordsmoothbutt November 26 2005, 22:08:42 UTC

*giggle*
This is so sudden!

smek316 November 25 2005, 23:08:57 UTC

your poems still make me cry.

lordsmoothbutt November 26 2005, 22:11:33 UTC

thanks, that means alot