One Sentence Challenge

[lost_constant]

#01 - Comfort
Ben looked down at the woman’s rain-soaked hair that spilled across his pillow, fingertips tracing her bare shoulder as he wondered what distress might haven driven her into his arms.

#02 - Kiss
It had been a trap all along, and Ben knew it - but he would never regret that traitorous kiss from her lips, nor let the ill intentions

Comments

[goaliepam]

Wow. I would love to see a story for each of the prompts. Some of them brought a little tear to my eye. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity.

[lost_constant]

Thank *you* for the kind review. <3

I'm right there with you. Almost every single one of these sentences has an amazing story behind it...and I want to know it all. :D

[prlrocks]

Great job. Like everyone else said, it makes me want to read more.

[lost_constant]

Thank you! :D

I'm right there with you. Hehe, so many of these sentences would be a wonderful starting point for a fic. lol, I will never be in need of a fic prompt again.

[pinkeraserdust]

Ben/Juliet is such a versatile ship. It can be all angst, manipulation, and torment, and at the same time sweet and innocent. ^__~ I love it.

These sentences are beautiful (esp. Heaven/Hell) and they really capture the all the different aspects of their relationship.

My only problem is with #5 and that's just because Dorito's Ranch *Potato* Chips... don't exist. >.< To my knowledge anyway (and my knowledge of junk food is fairly comprehensive).

[lost_constant]

Thank you so much. Yeah, my best friend (

[pinkeraserdust]

Sure thing. ^__^

[ciel_est_bleu]

Every single sentence is so beautiful :) !!!
I second that I'd like to read a fic about every sentence... because they show so many different aspects of one of the most complicated relationships ever.

Oh, I wish I'd be able to write...

[ciel_est_bleu]

Lol, I just wanted to let you know that I'm printing the list right now (hope that's okay, you know: copyright etc ;D ) because I might have time to think about it while I'm on vacation - not that I'll have that much time, it's not really vacation but a school trip with lost of culture and that stuff ;) . But I might feel the need to be inspired by these ideas :) . But that doesn't necessarily mean that I'm going to post anything because I'm really not a good writer.

[lost_constant]

Oh, no, I dont mind at all! :D I'm very, very flattered in fact.

You really should try your hand at writing. Maybe even do a sentence challenge of your own. Trust me, if you have an urge to write...just do it and youd be surprised what comes out! :)

Also, as I have said before to others, the Ben!fandom is one of the nicest, most encouraging fandoms I have ever been part of...so you should give it a try. Start out with just a little 100 word drabble and see what happens. ;)

Have fun on your trip, darlin! Be safe.

[mrslinus17]

Oh god, amazing.