One Sentence Challenge

Apr 02, 2008 13:57

#01 - Comfort
Ben looked down at the woman’s rain-soaked hair that spilled across his pillow, fingertips tracing her bare shoulder as he wondered what distress might haven driven her into his arms.

#02 - Kiss
It had been a trap all along, and Ben knew it - but he would never regret that traitorous kiss from her lips, nor let the ill intentions ( Read more... )

pairings: ben/juliet, fandom: lost, challenge: 1 sentence

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wooedandwon April 5 2008, 01:38:01 UTC
All right baby, here are my favorites:

Rain--This one was just beautiful, captivating.

Happiness--This one was enough to make -me- lol, out loud.

Ears--Ain't it the truth?

Wind-- This was just too cute.

Confusion--Ah, so complex! And again I say, isn't that just the way of things?

Smile--I don't know why this one was so appealing to me. I just really liked it.

Sun--You know, as completely un-ben as this seems, I can totally see it happening.

So there you are. Beautiful work as ever. (And I apologize for any spelling/typos--I'm working from my iPod and it's really hard to proofread.)

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jade_melody April 5 2008, 21:50:36 UTC
omg there are more and i ADORE THEM!
I was especially struck by the brilliance of Heaven & Hell.
Definitely saving these! :)

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