awesome u should make a book of poetry and get it published i think u could do it. tho in the 2nd thingy 2nd line shouldnt id but "I'd live" ? not "I live" ?
It kind of sounds like a song because it's really repeatative (sp?). I like it but maybe you should edit it a little, because to be honest it's all like.. you're looking at a picture and then you're painting. My favorite part is the one about the "I walked a thousand miles, yet never let a foot out the door" Thats awsome, but really it doesn't have much to do with everything, you should try to stress more of why you miss your old life.. and the name doesnt sound right because you're talking about the painting more then the picture. There's no more then one. I like it but truly it could use some work. I'll tell you it's better then anything Kristen ever has done. ;-) love ya baby.. <33
So if they make so many paintings about a picture, why not take down the picture? Why paint instead of somthing else, if you're trying to figure out what the picture relaly means maybe you should say that in the poem thing, or maybe you did and Im just too lazy to read it all. I'll comment on your other one later when I feel like it..I think you should make a poem to go with your layout!! ABOUT SWINGS. okay sorry I just love swings, is the picture the one, of.. nevermind, xo.
I told you already the stuff that I told you but I'm going to re-post it here. There are thousands of paintings and pictures that were made to distract the person from looking at the picture hanging in front of the mirror, so the person is looking at the picture, and then painting another one to take the mind off the original. Why not just take the picture down? because the person wants to figure out what the picture really means. It's a picture of the perosn, but perhaps not they're outer appearance. so the person doesn't really know what it's a picture of.
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There are thousands of paintings and pictures that were made to distract the person from looking at the picture hanging in front of the mirror, so the person is looking at the picture, and then painting another one to take the mind off the original.
Why not just take the picture down? because the person wants to figure out what the picture really means. It's a picture of the perosn, but perhaps not they're outer appearance. so the person doesn't really know what it's a picture of.
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