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missyliss89 August 3 2010, 17:43:45 UTC
It's actually been forever since I just sat and read any one thing that wasn't longer than a few thousand words. But I just liked the idea of this, and as soon as I started, I couldn't just stop.

I adore how you portrayed both Winchester boys, and could feel myself getting frustrated along with Dean and sad with Sam. It was just a beautiful piece. And then the ending just blindsided me. I hadn't been expecting Tessa or the Yellow-Eyed Demon, but wow. It made so much sense that I can't believe I hadn't thought about them.

I honestly can't compliment you enough on this piece. I loved reading it.

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lotsayaoi August 3 2010, 18:25:09 UTC
I know what you mean about not reading long fics very often, I have a love of one-shots :) But I'm glad you gave this a chance, and SO happy you liked it!! :D

Btw, yours was my first serious comment, so yay!! Thank you so much for reading!! :D

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michapuss August 3 2010, 19:18:07 UTC
Wow - it can be hard to find a unique story at times, so many ideas have been done in various forms, but this is the first time I've seen a story like this one. And I've got to say I loved it, and it's definitely being added to memories; I'll be reading this one over and over.

Thank you xxx

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lotsayaoi August 3 2010, 19:55:34 UTC
Oh my goodness, that's such a huge compliment!! Thank you!! :D

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wayward_jr August 3 2010, 19:33:09 UTC
Great job, thank you)
Really liked your ghost!Dean ))

But is there going to be a sequel? )))*puppy eyes*

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lotsayaoi August 3 2010, 19:58:10 UTC
Maybe if you clap loud enough ;)

Thank you for reading, and I'm so glad you liked it! Ghost!Dean was awesome to write, so I'm happy you enjoyed reading him :)

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wayward_jr August 3 2010, 20:00:14 UTC
:-D
Then it's gonna be a clapping storm soon! ))

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lotsayaoi August 3 2010, 21:59:55 UTC
Lol!! :D

I'm not really sure about the idea of a sequel, I've knocked it around in my head a little, but there's nothing concrete as of yet. But your clapping has been duly noted!! :)

<3 Jay

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katsheswims August 3 2010, 19:39:14 UTC
Gasp!

I'm hoping Sam makes the deal in a way that lets him grab the Colt, shoot the demon, and Sam and Dean will be free! And since you don't say anything to the contrary that's what I will imagine happening.

I was thinking Sam would die at Cold Oak, and then he and Dean could be together-as ghosts or moving on together, but getting thier bodies back is great too.

Keep up the good work.

I loved this!!

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lotsayaoi August 3 2010, 20:01:22 UTC
I originally had a more specific ending in mind for this, but at some point I stopped around here for a break and when I came back I decided I liked the ambiguity of it. I'm glad you liked it!! :D Thank you for reading!!

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elusive_life_77 August 4 2010, 02:59:45 UTC
Guh. Dude. Seriously.

My only complaint is that its over!!!! I saw the author's notes link and had a mental moment of "NO! Don't Stop Yet!!!"

Freakin amazing.

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lotsayaoi August 4 2010, 03:17:25 UTC
Aww! I was sad it ended, too, actually, but it made the most sense to end it this way. I'm glad you liked it, though! :D Thanks for reading!!

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