Comments | lotsoflov_e: don't say goodbye: drabble

lotsoflov_e

don't say goodbye: drabble

Dec 23, 2009 23:48

2pm drabble
jay/taec, some ot7
written based on how i feel right now

( I can’t read your feelings since you try not to meet eyes with me Because I feel like a lost child, I just wait )

Comments 14

mrskimj_j December 23 2009, 16:11:00 UTC

When I read the first line of the song Taec "sang" I was like.. wow, DBSK? =D
But then again, who knows, he did admit he joined DBSK fan cafe once (DNBN? xD), that Ok-tizen really...

Mm... I'm not really a fan of sentimental pieces, but I really like the way it's put together and the fragmentism of it all <3

lotsoflov_e December 23 2009, 16:15:34 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

p/s: i really, really, really like your username. /jaejoong bias

mrskimj_j December 23 2009, 16:17:52 UTC

p.s.s. I was stoopid enough to delete an account with my original-10-year-old nickname as a username, so I had to use something else.. and well... not too subtle eh? xD

p.s.s. I wish the ending of your drabble came true....

lotsoflov_e December 23 2009, 16:27:13 UTC

p.p.p.s: xD we don't have to hide our jaejoong bias, we've gotta be proud of it! :DD

p.p.p.p.s: so do i...i wish it came true too ):

krdzr December 23 2009, 18:06:00 UTC

first of all, i have the same icon as you so i laughed. (so imma use it XD)

this is the second time I'm reminded of the possibility of Jay coming back.

you just managed to put together two of the things that make me sad the most. Although, i did imagine taec singing/rapping to that. nice.

taecyeons_teeth December 23 2009, 18:52:10 UTC

Omg, I totally teared up while reading this while sitting in the living room and had to go to my room to be all like "*SNIFF* T_____T" so my family wouldn't see me and ask awkward questions hahah
I really really hope the ending of your story will come true some day *sigh*

2pmconspiracy December 24 2009, 10:38:34 UTC

hey! shall comment on your fic cos i saw your sweet comment for mine<3
yay i love JayTaec! lol actually i love JaySu and JayWoo too! okay idk if i used the right terms there since i came up with how the pairings should sound on spot~
yepp anyways, i love your writing style! whoo lots of hints of JayTaec there! yepp keep up the good work :D and oh if you write a new fic, do write slightly MORE of JayTaec/ JaySu! like more *coughs* action! okay look forward to reading more of your fics! :D

iateyourdinner December 24 2009, 19:30:53 UTC

the starting of the story made me scream at my computer screen! i was like, "PARK JAEBEOM, EAT!" D:

and that last line brought back loads of memories. ah, idol army.
argh, jay, come back alreadyyyyy. T_T