Make Fast - H5-0 3x03 Coda

Oct 11, 2012 00:03


Make Fast

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simplyn2deep October 10 2012, 14:08:52 UTC
I like how there was just the right amount of seriousness, then when the emotions got to be too much, the jokes came out to lighten the mood.

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kitmerlot1213 October 10 2012, 15:10:45 UTC
This was just lovely!

Danny was completely freaking out when they were stranded out in the ocean and Steve handled it like a pro, staying calm and helping Danny to stay calm, so good for both of them for acknowledging just how truly harrowing that experience was for both of them.

Wonderful work on this :)

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lunachickk October 10 2012, 15:30:26 UTC
This was really perfect and has left a great big smile on my face. It would fit within show canon perfectly.

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antivol October 10 2012, 17:13:23 UTC
This is really a great coda. Thanks a lot for the good feelings!

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landrews October 10 2012, 19:32:40 UTC
Nice coda! I like Steve sharing his first glancing blow with mortality since Danny had and them acknowledging each other's strengths- Danny could still focus on Steve's six through his fear (that's called bravery, right? lol) and Steve has a few mad skillz that come in handy here and there :-) Great job!

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