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Proxy

Oct 13, 2012 22:22

Title: Proxy
Pairing: It's complicated. It's Het. But It's a mental threesome. Steve/Catherine while she works on making it Steve/Danny...
A/N: I'm totally open to the suggestion of a follow up if people have ideas. This is my first toe dipping into something more than PG so feedback to further my writing is very welcome!

( Summary: Catherine's agitation with Steve soon turns to a need to make him see what has been right in front of him for far too long. )

Comments 17

fatorangekat October 13 2012, 12:43:42 UTC

Very nice, I really enjoyed this. I like Catherine and I have no doubt she's seen what's been going on between Steve and Danny- even if they don't know what's going on!

lou_c October 13 2012, 14:34:17 UTC

It's true. EVERYBODY knows before them...

fatorangekat October 13 2012, 15:17:08 UTC

It's this intricate dance that they know is there, but not what to do about it.

kapuahi October 13 2012, 12:46:16 UTC

I really like this, Cath is a bright girl she knows what's going on and I think she cares enough to push them together if she can

lasairfhiona October 13 2012, 13:25:03 UTC

I like! I really hope you continue this. I know you're aiming for Steve/Danny but a threesome would be nice too. :)

simplyn2deep October 13 2012, 18:25:55 UTC

Cath, you are such a good friend. Steve's going to have an interesting conversation with Danny.

and I just realized...if I were Danny and got a call from my best friend and he said he wanted to ask me something, I'd probably freak out and think he was going to ask me to be best man at his wedding...because you KNOW Danny's thinking things are serious between Catherine and Steve and his mind would just go THERE.

lou_c October 14 2012, 07:32:56 UTC

Haha this gives me ideas... Hmmm... Permission to fiddle with this?

simplyn2deep October 14 2012, 07:57:15 UTC

Go for it and have fun!

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