The arc where Gracie becomes ill with the flu is a stroke of genius. Remembering history from the 'War to End All Wars' (WWI) where more people died from influenza than were killed in the fighting.
This was such a lovely story! I like that Danny trusted Steve with taking care of Grace when she was sick and I'm proud of both of them for being so determined to have a life together.
I thought that Grace getting sick was so good. How Steve put himself out there to help her and then went all the way out where he could have gotten in so much trouble for the penicillin. I honestly didn't know that they only started using it on the military in WWII and find that fasinating. I like how you ended the story with him coming back after 2 years and the palm tree, all of them together. I really enjoyed this a lot.
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Great work!
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The arc where Gracie becomes ill with the flu is a stroke of genius. Remembering history from the 'War to End All Wars' (WWI) where more people died from influenza than were killed in the fighting.
Taking chances is what it's all about.
Steve, Danny and Grace.
Won.
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You know I am always going to push you to write, because I always love your stories.
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Great work on this :):)
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