Oh I loved this! Thank you so much for writing my prompt, it turned out so well! :) Their "morning after" was adorable, and the "house has little ears" "house has big ears too" exchange had me laughing out loud. Such a great fic!
I'm curious as to what your original prompt was to inspire lou_c to write this story. Do you remember what it was? If so, could you please "share it with the class?"
I think your formatting got a bit messed up after Danny says he's an asshole.
Kono's advice was great. and Danny did take the first baby step in talking to Steve. I could tell he was still hurt though.
not a twin but triplet. didn't see that. I always figured that if Steve or Danny ever went on a date with someone, they'd spend practically the entire time talking about the other, or Grace.
Way to go Libby for setting Danny straight. great analogy (I think) that Danny used in regards to him ranting before thinking.
the ending with the getting together was just great.
Eep it was messed up. Let's blame formatting for Louise forgetting to push enter... Yes. (Thanks! It is fixed now :D )
I love Kono and I think she is so smart. I hope we get some more good Kono this season.
I think they'd talk a lot about the other too. And in this case think it is okay because, he he's her sister so we have him in common... But oh Steve you're so transparent to everyone but yourself.
I always think that Danny uses words, he says so much to avoid REALLY saying anything...
I am glad you liked it and thank you for your lovely comment :D :D
Thank you, thank you, thank you! It's like instant gratification for me. I was so hooked on this story that I was sitting in a take out food restaurant parking lot finishing your story and typing you the two comments I sent you. Dammit. I had leave to go get dinner for the fam and didn't want to so I could finish reading. Thus, the damn parking lot. Then, I got home to find part two! The backstory about Hannah was a surprise and an interesting twist on Danny's suffering and Gracie's features (I always assumed she looked like Rachel and acted more like Danny). Thanks for a fantastic story!!!!
Beautiful story! Lovely seeing Kono and Libby help the boys see what is obvious to everyone else. Clueless boys who finally figure it out in a sweet happy ending is appreciated! Mahalo! :)
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Great job, lou_c. You've got a fan in me.
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Kono's advice was great. and Danny did take the first baby step in talking to Steve. I could tell he was still hurt though.
not a twin but triplet. didn't see that. I always figured that if Steve or Danny ever went on a date with someone, they'd spend practically the entire time talking about the other, or Grace.
Way to go Libby for setting Danny straight. great analogy (I think) that Danny used in regards to him ranting before thinking.
the ending with the getting together was just great.
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I love Kono and I think she is so smart. I hope we get some more good Kono this season.
I think they'd talk a lot about the other too. And in this case think it is okay because, he he's her sister so we have him in common... But oh Steve you're so transparent to everyone but yourself.
I always think that Danny uses words, he says so much to avoid REALLY saying anything...
I am glad you liked it and thank you for your lovely comment :D :D
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