Comments | louislouisohno: And Boys Will Be Girls, Harry/Louis, 4/4

louislouisohno

And Boys Will Be Girls, Harry/Louis, 4/4

Oct 31, 2012 15:40

Title: And Boys Will Be Girls [4/4]
Pairing: Harry/Louis, Liam/Zayn
Disclaimer: Entirely fictional. Title taken from Lola by The Kinks.
Word Count: 1, 372 [5, 000 + total]
Summary: Burlesque club!AU. He’s boldly beautiful. He’s half naked and Harry’s heart is betraying him, just as his eyes are, near enough cracking his ribs with it’s beating. Harry’s ( Read more... )

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colazitron October 31 2012, 19:28:52 UTC

Louis as a burlesque dancer. Shit, yes, please. Oh god, the image of him up on that stage in that little sailor outfit. So much yes. This whole thing was really sweet and hot and I loved it.

louislouisohno November 1 2012, 13:23:04 UTC

Thank you so much!

zianourry October 31 2012, 20:33:46 UTC

I really like this. It's quick and easy how it goes between them and it just makes it realistic.
Also, Louis in a sailor outfit, could we wish for more ? ;)
I really love your writing.

louislouisohno November 1 2012, 13:24:20 UTC

Thank you honey :)

we_are_the_same October 31 2012, 23:56:57 UTC

Ohhh this is wonderful! I loved how easy everything seemed, and the friendship between Zayn, Liam and Louis was beautifully written. I really adored Astrid too, this is a gem of a fic!

louislouisohno November 1 2012, 13:26:26 UTC

Thank you, and I'm glad you liked Astrid, too!

101itaa November 1 2012, 00:25:39 UTC

oh wow, this was so gorgeous! i loved all the imagery and i could just imagine louis' skin dusted in glitter. and the hot pants! yum.

also the characterization was really lovely. louis was enthralling from his first appearance and harry's almost-innocence was so charming. fantastic.

louislouisohno November 1 2012, 13:29:12 UTC

Thank you, your comment is lovely!

wayoffbase November 1 2012, 01:31:45 UTC

Oh man, that was awesome. Louis as a boylesque performer is the best idea ever. Although sucking on someone's nipples after they've been wearing pasties might not be so fun - glue residue isn't exactly tasty lol.

louislouisohno November 1 2012, 13:32:37 UTC

I think you should know that I first read this comment when I was highly intoxicated and I nearly choked laughing. I figure though, that Harry is a sweetheart and Louis was stinging... you know, he'd deal with it, haha. Thank you though!

wayoffbase November 1 2012, 22:12:54 UTC

Bah. Glad to be amusing :P I can go with that :D