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Erosion - Part IV - rejeneration

Nov 18, 2006 17:00

Title: Erosion
Author: rejeneration, but you can call me Jen.
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, cameo appearance by Dick
Word Count: Part IV: 6100
Rating: NC-17 for language, violence, and masturbation
Summary: Love, actually.
Spoilers/Warnings: Season 2; This is FF. And this chapter, sadly, character death. -sniff-
A/N: Part four of the "epic" I started for loveathons ( Read more... )

challenge - epic smut summer 2006, all fiction posts, member - rejeneration

Comments 46

berry_hearts November 18 2006, 23:38:44 UTC

oh Jen. :D
I always find it kinky when guys jerk off in the shower.
I don;t know why. Maybe it's because I am a sick, sick person.
Who is obsessed with fictional characters. woe is me! LOL.

great as always.

rejeneration November 20 2006, 17:04:10 UTC

Kinky = Good! -grinning- However, I can honestly say I don't find shower masturbation kinky. Hot, yes. Kinky... hmm, I thank you're going to have to try a little harder for me. -smirk-

Who is obsessed with fictional characters.

It's terrible, isn't it?

great as always.

Thanks so much, hon!

rowanceleste November 19 2006, 00:05:32 UTC

I loved it and I loved how Logan just tossed his towel onto her suitcase and walked naked down the hallway. I'm sure he wants Veronica to remember one of the reasons she wants to come back. I had to go back and re-read the other chapters again because I couldn't remember reading chapter 3. I must have missed it somehow! I'm glad Veronica is going back to tell Tom and like Logan, I'm not surprised she hadn't done it before she left, although I don't necessarily think it was because she would have married Tom and settled if Logan hadn't been available or didn't want to be with her. Settling for nice just seems so Veronica 1.0, but maybe Logan sees that side of her more clearly than I do. I was definitely surprised she was pregnant but not surprised while it shocked Logan, it didn't necessarily cause him to not want to be with Veronica anymore. I always thought that if it was Veronica that was pregnant and in a coma after the bus crash, that Logan would have run off with her baby if he was ever asked to protect him/her for some reason. ( ... )

rejeneration November 20 2006, 17:08:55 UTC

I'm sure he wants Veronica to remember one of the reasons she wants to come back.

-laughing- That's like -the- reason, right? I'm sorry, Logan, I don't mean to objectify you. yes I do

although I don't necessarily think it was because she would have married Tom and settled if Logan hadn't been available or didn't want to be with her. Settling for nice just seems so Veronica 1.0, but maybe Logan sees that side of her more clearly than I do.

No, you're absolutely right. Veronica wouldn't have married him. She pretty much just dropped everything for Logan, even Keith. And we both know how unlike her that is. But even if Logan hadn't taken her back, even if he'd been busy in his life with other things and there was no hope for reconciliation, she still wouldn't have married Tom.

Logan wouldn't care who the father was because he'd consider the baby to be Veronica's and Logan would love any part of her and especially a child that came from her.They're definitely going to be dealing with this in the next few parts... but I agree with ( ... )

angeleyesv22 November 19 2006, 00:52:30 UTC

" ‘Ronnie would have liked the ocean here,’ he said. ‘We should have taught her how to surf.’”"

That pretty much killed me a little.

rejeneration November 20 2006, 17:09:57 UTC

-smiling softly- Ahh Dick. May he rest in peace.

anonymous November 19 2006, 02:31:13 UTC

I do enjoy this story -- the angst level is just so high, it's almost painful to read. And that's a compliment. I am interested to see how Veronica deals with the mess she needs to face, especially since she is pregnant, and how long can she and Logan go without jumping each other? Killing off Dick makes me sad, but is in keeping with the tone you have set. I am looking forward to the next chapter and hope it won't be quite so long between installments, although getting lost over at vm_library is something I can completely understand. -- AC

rejeneration November 20 2006, 17:13:23 UTC

I tell you, after reading what our lovely Madame Librarian put together... wow, the angst in this seems... tame! -smiling-

how long can she and Logan go without jumping each other?

That's gonna be a rough one, huh! It's hard to even keep him in clothes...

Killing off Dick makes me sad

Me too, actually. He had a lot he wanted to say, but... alas, no more.

Thanks so much for reading!

anonymous November 21 2006, 18:27:16 UTC

Oh yes -- the angst around the fandom lately seems really high. And really high quality as well. It's painful -- but in a good way.

salingergurl November 19 2006, 03:54:47 UTC

You know I love everything you write. And the scene where they're on the couch and Logan's talking about his abuse... I felt pain deep in my soul. Seriously. It was intense and beautiful and sad and touching all at the same time. Can't wait to see how it all ends up!

rejeneration November 20 2006, 17:15:00 UTC

You know I love everything you write.

Eep. Thank you! -smiling-

And the scene where they're on the couch and Logan's talking about his abuse... I felt pain deep in my soul.

They've just got sooooo much to work through... so many things to share... it's cathartic being able to write it for them. -smiling-

Thanks so much, hon.