everything perfect comes in fives

[loveclouds]

everything perfect comes in fives
yunho/changmin
r
when yunho gets very sick and doesn't get better.

obvious warning: death.

Comments

[kurogoma]

Yunho will never, ever, ever open his eyes again to smile at him, to tell him he loves him, to laugh and joke and play around with him, to comfort him and help him through the bad days, to make him writhe with pleasure, to feed him, to care for him, to humor him and do his bidding, to treasure him and tell him he's perfect in every way.

Yunho will never again love him.

BAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWLING MY EYES OUT. ;_______________;

[loveclouds]

LOL THAT BAD??

i love you ivy. ;3; ♥

[kurogoma]

it didn't make me cry so hard that it gave me a headache like had me at hello fic did....but a few tears escaped. sniffs.

that one they were both dumb, but at least this one, they loved so deep and so hard and stayed together for twenty odd years.

i love you too, yuxi :)) &hearts

[loveclouds]

ROFL i didn't know that fic did that to you, i'm sorry. D: but eee, good, i'm glad you liked this. :) bittersweet with a dash of dark humor. i think. ... 8D

♥ i am off to bed. :D

[aponny]

Today is the holiday and I'm supposed to be happy & gay, but I'm sitting here and CRYING. oh fuck. :((

"Promise me something?" Yunho whispers.
"Sure."
"Don't come after me, okay? Be happy."

*emo mode on* that was so beautiful yet heartbreaking. ♥

[loveclouds]

D: go and be merry! celebrate!!

:) thanks for reading anyway. ;) ♥

[riofrio]

i will come back for this! my report starts in 10 minutes so I can't read this right now.. ;__;

[loveclouds]

:D good luck!

[riofrio]

thanks!:D took me long enough but I'm back..

first of all, the format was perfect with your theme.. the story just flowed out naturally and it was just an amazing thing to read, albeit a heartbreaking one..

Parties and funerals are all the same. Celebration is to mourn. The only difference is that at a funeral, there's always one loved one less to attend.

this unspoken reality poked me hard.. idk, i love how the angst pours out with just three simple sentences..

as morbid as it sounds, i just love when people write about death and the ways people who are left behind deal with the acceptance.. needless to say, another favorite piece from you..:D

[loveclouds]

uh oh, late reply is late D:

eeee thanks so much!! :'D this was difficult to write because it was sad but i don't think the emotions were difficult to express at all. :( i think everyone's dealt with loss in their lives and...sigh. :'(

♥

[li9htzan93]

i'm cryinggggggg...i always love homin..hikz..

but yes..it is beautifuly written..

[loveclouds]

good! :)

and thank you for reading!

[darknessgryphon]

I told myself that if I ended up crying after I read this, I would have to punch you in the face out of love.

...

Now tell me where you are in Canada so i can punch you in the face out of love sushi that is named Yuxi >:| <3

[loveclouds]

...

LMFAO SUMI OMFG COWERS FOREVER NOW I'LL DEF NEVER TELL YOU ASKLJDFKLJSDF

;_; i love you. ♥ now my head hurts from lack of sleep, so i am really off to bed. but next time, we're going to talk properly on aim when i'm not a dribbling, sleep-deprived idiot. :'3 ♥

[angel_9_lives]

and then you tell ME where she is so I can punch her too ;_; out of love, too, of course:P

*shakes fist at Yuxi*

~Angel