everything perfect comes in fives

[loveclouds]

everything perfect comes in fives
yunho/changmin
r
when yunho gets very sick and doesn't get better.

obvious warning: death.

Comments

[jhj2001]

omgsun why so angsty?????!!!
i want to cry but it's not pretty to cry in a lecture :O
good job as always bb :3

...he cries because he's told he's as healthy as a multivitamin
this part made me LOled though

[loveclouds]

:)) thanks!

and haha yeah, i was hoping someone would take notice of that line :D

[ibaranonamida]

I really enjoyed this story. This may sound weird but my Uncle just died from esophageal cancer (Barrett's esophagus) and this, sadly, made me wonder what my Aunt must be feeling.

I cried a lot, but in a good way? I've really been ignoring it, and I had no idea that this story would affect me the way it did.

As a story, it's so well-written and it just made me realize that I should call my Aunt. I'm sorry if this is a strange comment. Your writing is always beautiful, but, this work is especially meaningful. It really touched me.

[loveclouds]

oh god, i'm really sorry D:

you should definitely call her. i'm glad this fic touched you :))

[cindelius]

... I tried writing a response to this more than once and have been at a loss for words until now. Reading this fic was like having someone reach a hand through my chest and slowly squeeze. I enjoyed your characterizations and readily believed each action taken on behalf of your characters, loving their admitted flaws and strengths that we see in public ... but this story affected me beyond the characters

[loveclouds]

ahhh wow, what an amazing comment, thank you so much!

i'm personally going through a hard time, so channeling these emotions was more therapeutic than artistic license on my part. i don't really like angst fics either, death or not, so i'm glad you gave this one a shot.

i don't want to seem like i don't appreciate your comment, it's just that i literally can't find anything worthwhile to say except thank you. i really really really appreciate your feedback and it makes me smile to know that this fic made you feel something. thanks so much for reading. :)

♥

[kelseyum]

uhm, can you please never write a sad fic again !? it makes me cry.

but seriously, this was just so absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking and why the hell is writing not your god damn major ?!!!

What you do to your body at 20 is what it feels and looks like at 30 well fuck me, im screwed. LOLLL

and random sidenote, how yunhos shot class didnt break. kind of not similar, but my parents used to have these expensive china plates that had a picture of princess diana on one and prince charles on the other, and one day me or my sister were carrying them and they dropped and prince charles fell on the tile and didnt break and princess diana dropped on the carpet and hers broke...and like a week later she died. FREAAAAKY ! haha.

buuuut, i miss you. and i want to see you ! not this weekend, but next :DD ?!

[loveclouds]

lol kelsey, i love you. ♥

AND STOP DRINKING. without me, i mean. ;____;

dude, that's so creepy, lol. i hope you didn't feel like you were somehow responsible LOL

i miss you too. :( next weekend sounds good! :D let's eat korean :D

[kelseyum]

well i would love to drink with you. but you seem intent on never letting that happen since you never want to go out with me :( loll.

but okay goood! we should eat korean AND THEN GO GET DRUNK :DD !

[loveclouds]

:))

but i'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!