Comments | loveclouds: catching all the lights

loveclouds

catching all the lights

Aug 17, 2010 02:13

catching all the lights
yunho/changmin
pg
dance dance dance.

this seems more middle-aged than i had intended *_*.

( i'll take you down the only road i've ever been down )

p: yunho/changmin

Comments 81

one_milky_smile August 17 2010, 15:04:14 UTC

me claim a spot ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

one_milky_smile August 17 2010, 16:10:30 UTC

*giggles* yeah u right, this is a little bit middle-aged *laugh* but I still like this. simple, sweet and nice~~~~

p/s: me love all the lessons you mentioned in the fic~~~ especially lesson 192, 200 (AND 140 tooooo LOL)

loveclouds August 18 2010, 01:46:13 UTC

thanks, i'm glad you liked! :D

and lmaolmaolmao ;_; lesson 140's my favorite too LOL

zelshamada August 17 2010, 18:25:09 UTC

Lesson 200: happiness is a process. If you want to achieve happiness, be happy. You make my whole day.
This is beautiful. Life can be very wonderful! I love that feeling! ^^ Thank you.

loveclouds August 18 2010, 01:46:28 UTC

i'm happy you liked it. :D thanks for reading!

darknessgryphon August 17 2010, 19:00:16 UTC

d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw. Rekindled relationship HoMin is so much love <3 /loves allover your sudden inspiration

loveclouds August 18 2010, 01:46:43 UTC

:')))) i'm going to lay my love all over you HA ♥

oannapantso August 17 2010, 19:23:54 UTC

i always miss you when you don't update every day. so most days. YOU SHOULD JUST WRITE ALL THE TIME OKAY.

i was going to leave a super-fangirly-homin-is-presh-oh-younglovvveee~ comment, but then the time gap came. so then i was gonna leave a ]:<-why-are-you-like-this comment, but then they met again. and it was the reality i wanted. so i'll just leave this comment instead:

YOU ARE PERFECT. ♥

loveclouds August 18 2010, 01:47:30 UTC

;_;

i still remember when i used to write/post every single day. man those were the days /old-timer

LOL I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. i think you're the perfect one. ;______; i want a reality like them when i get old. and hopefully by then i'll have a yunho. :x

♥

oannapantso August 18 2010, 05:23:05 UTC

;_; oh, creative flow, how we mourn for you.

BUT I LOVE YOU TOO. it's definitely youuu~ and awwww. you're making me into a romantic instead of a skeptic. ;_; WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD TO ME.

satoshiice August 17 2010, 21:52:15 UTC

So that made me teary eyed for no reason....this is such a beautiful piece in its own simplicity...it was just really really gorgeous...Yunho was just really gorgeous...Yunho teaching lessons to changmin just made me grin....

"Changmin smiles at Yunho, tears rising to his eyes to make them shine. "You know what?" he asks softly, "for once, the grass was already greener on my side."

Lesson 199: you can't dance forever. One of these days, your bones will grow weary, your joints will hurt, your feet will trip where they used to glide. There will be other dancers, younger, brighter, more enthusiastic, willing to make the same mistakes and all you can do is watch them fail and hope they learn."

Really loved that part!

I loved that it wasn't a picture perfect ending because that's not how real life works...I love how you wrote this so realistically...

loveclouds August 18 2010, 01:48:24 UTC

nah, i think you have good reason. :) i think simple romance can be very moving even if it's understated, and thinking about middle-aged homin make me really happy. just the life lessons and the trials you go through and redemption in the end, i think that's wonderful. :))))

heh, i think i wrote a bit of realism into this one. ;) i'm glad you liked it, thanks so much!