Bet Me; Chapter 5; Mind on the Job, Gilbert

Mar 15, 2012 20:45


A/N: Wow, here we are on day 6 of 7. Some people have asked me should I re-read Bet Me? Well that's always up to the individual. If there was a chapter to re-read, however, this would be it! This is the last of the "old" chapters.

Tomorrow, the first new chapter since July 4th 2011 will be added. So, so nervous. I have to warn you, you might get a ( Read more... )

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siberia21 March 15 2012, 10:49:26 UTC
More "human" side of Damon, I love it! Now you really surprised me. Not only Elena could get an insight into Damon´s relationship with his family that formed his personality and motivation years back, they even talked (and actually told the truth!) about the prom. Too bad they can´t trust each other...yet(!!:) the would /will be unbreakable if they could. I ALWAYS have to notice and appreciate how smoothly you overcome the emotional stuff vs. detective story drama switchovers (sorry, probably wrongly expressed for my bad English, I hope you get the meaning). Still loving Melody. Even Stefan surprised me! Thank you Michelle, you definitely made my day!

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loveepiclove March 15 2012, 12:54:13 UTC
Thank you! :)

"I ALWAYS have to notice and appreciate how smoothly you overcome the emotional stuff vs. detective story drama switchovers"

I find this really tough, so thank you.

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dunedesert March 15 2012, 11:36:50 UTC
thank you for this chapter. i remember first time i'd read this chappie with the kiss at the end and i was left all breathless after reading that.
please, don't let us wait too long. this story is amazing.

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loveepiclove March 15 2012, 12:55:08 UTC
Thank you! I am pleased to hear the kiss made you breathless last time. Hopefully I will be able to do that again :)

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dutchess_sandra March 15 2012, 11:51:28 UTC
That talk between Damon and Giuseppe was so sad. The latter does not seem to care or have cared about his nephew at all. I'm really glad Elena got to witness it since it made her understand his explanation about why he did what he did on prom night even more. It's a good thing that they now both now that their past was based on misinterpretations, and that (since they cannot change it) they need to put it behind them.

Oh, this now got even more interesting. More competition! Now they need to work together even more to get their stories out sooner and better than Jules and Brady's (wonderful last name - lol), and they still have to try to out-scoop the other, too.

Hot kiss!

Really looking forward to meeting Klaus, the other couples, and the first seminar!

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loveepiclove March 15 2012, 12:56:12 UTC
Thanks for your wonderful comments. I have so enjoyed reading them. I hope meeting Klaus and the other couples is enjoyable reading :)

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Ah yes the heated kiss hot_vox March 15 2012, 12:33:11 UTC
Mmmmm still makes me breathless and my heart race. If I recall my ff review was overflowing with anticipation of the next chapter and all of the possibilities the therapy sessions would do to the tension between them.

CAN NOT WAIT FOR TOMORROW!! It's like Christmas in March.

Thank you thank you thank you for wanting to write this again. It brings me as much joy to read it as it does for you to write it again. Let the therapy begin!

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Re: Ah yes the heated kiss loveepiclove March 15 2012, 12:51:57 UTC
I seriously wish I could favorite this comment! This comment is like the best Christmas present ever :)

I'm so nervous about tomorrow. Hope I don't disappoint anybody.

Michelle

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Re: Ah yes the heated kiss hot_vox March 15 2012, 22:20:39 UTC
Glad you liked it cause I meant it truly.

You could never disappoint. Especially on LJ, we're all friends here.

:)

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thess2002 March 15 2012, 13:24:33 UTC
Oh my god! Just re-read this chapter and I got that really excited feeling in my gut. I literally cannot wait for your update tomorrow!!! I love Bet Me! :-)

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loveepiclove March 15 2012, 13:37:51 UTC
Thanks Thess. It's been eight long months...hope it is worth the wait :)

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