Bet Me; Chapter 5; Mind on the Job, Gilbert

Mar 15, 2012 20:45


A/N: Wow, here we are on day 6 of 7. Some people have asked me should I re-read Bet Me? Well that's always up to the individual. If there was a chapter to re-read, however, this would be it! This is the last of the "old" chapters.

Tomorrow, the first new chapter since July 4th 2011 will be added. So, so nervous. I have to warn you, you might get a ( Read more... )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

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pureheart151 March 15 2012, 14:54:43 UTC
I loved this chapter so much, I think it was actually my favorite one from you! I love how you revealed the fact why Damon set her up at the prom ten years ago, and how he felt about her. And I also like how you describe Elena's feelings - emotional, really beautiful written.

I was thrilled to read the kiss, I've waited for it since the minute you reposted this story. Pure awesomeness!

Really can't wait for the new 'new' chappie! After this kiss, I'm sure it's gonna be interesting.

Laura, xo

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titeve79 March 15 2012, 14:56:41 UTC
I remember the first time I've read this chapter. I had this very mature and adult reaction... I yelled Hell Yeah! in my room and clapped my hand... *clear my throat*

I'm so happy to read it again. Now I can't wait for the new ones! Amazing job, amazing writing!

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rosesforever94 March 15 2012, 15:07:43 UTC
I'm looking foward to read the next chapter tomorrow!!
I still remember how excited I was about this one. I loved the end of the chapter!

Xoxo

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scarlett2112 March 15 2012, 15:31:53 UTC
I just got home from 13 hr night shift (I'm an RN) so my brain isn't firing on all cylinders at the moment. I love this story. Guiseppe is an ass. Damon was still just a kid when they took him in. Guiseppe really had no regard for Damon at all. I wonder why they even bothered to give him a home. They seem like they'd disinfect the ground he walked upon in their home. I can see why he has issues. He's had to depend only on himself for so long.
Elena got a little insight into his life here too. It wasn't sunshine and roses by a long shot.. Poor guy. I'm glad he apologized, told her everything behind his deceit at the prom all those years ago.. Hopefully hearing that, on top of getting a glimpse into the environment he had to live in with Guiseppe, she'll reach inside and be able to forgive him.
The kiss smoldered. Off to bed Michelle, Anxious for new tomorrow.. You always exceed the bar....Have a wonderful rest of your day...Carol

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crimson_kiss17 March 15 2012, 15:35:39 UTC
SOOO EXCITED FOR THE NEW CHAPTER!
It will be flawless and wonderful!

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