Bet Me; Chapter 5; Mind on the Job, Gilbert

[loveepiclove]

A/N: Wow, here we are on day 6 of 7. Some people have asked me should I re-read Bet Me? Well that's always up to the individual. If there was a chapter to re-read, however, this would be it! This is the last of the "old" chapters.

Tomorrow, the first new chapter since July 4th 2011 will be added. So, so nervous. I have to warn you, you might get a

Comments

[shodges57]

Damn..you always know how to write their sexual chemistry! Seriously though, that kiss = STEAMY! I don't think damon was acting anymore than Elena was. ;)

Can't wait for the new chapter!!!

[lokya2046]

All the honesty.

I like that you let the truth come out so quickly, so we can have their second kiss! That is hot and full of emotions.

Now they know the truth 10 years ago, they have to face another demon - their mutual attractions. Truth been told, but they still need to work thing out.

And the kiss. it is HOT!

[princessme385]

I actually don't remember reading this chapter... hmm. Maybe it's my overused college student brain. Haha.

Anyway, I loved every moment. Especially the kiss! This chapter really got me excited for the new one. I love the extra element of competition with the couple from the other paper. I'm glad Damon felt the need to explain what happened with the Prom spectacle.

What excites me most is where you are going to go with this story. The possibilities are endless and, being a fan of your writing, I trust that you will not disappoint. This story is already unlike any I've ever read.

See you tomorrow! ;)

[dreamssincerity]

I love that they get what happened a little out in the open in this chapter :)

[parnassides]

The encounter with Giuseppe at the start of this chapter made me really feel for Damon. Yes, he's done some pretty jerky things so far in this story, but he has some deep seated inecurities and issues which are at least partly to blame for the way he acts. I think Elena realised that in this chapter too.

I love the scene in this chapter where they have lunch. It's so cute, and flirty, and fun. In fact, it's probably among my favourite scenes in this story so far :)

And I loved that they were finally totally honest with each other about prom night. I love those kind of 'truth telling' moments in stories, and it means they get to go into the retreat with a clean slate of sorts.

The ending. Oh, the ending. What. A. Kiss. <3