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Bet Me; Chapter 5; Mind on the Job, Gilbert

Mar 15, 2012 20:45

A/N: Wow, here we are on day 6 of 7. Some people have asked me should I re-read Bet Me? Well that's always up to the individual. If there was a chapter to re-read, however, this would be it! This is the last of the "old" chapters.

Tomorrow, the first new chapter since July 4th 2011 will be added. So, so nervous. I have to warn you, you might get a ( Read more... )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

Comments 38

God I love it! elizabeth85cec March 15 2012, 18:06:10 UTC

I just LOVE that their passion and feelings for each other are so strong it has withstood time :D I'd like to believe that that kind of passionate forever kind of love still exists and you portray that SO well. The whole time I was reading I kept getting butterflies in my stomach, and then when the HOT parts came along, EVEN I, could feel the lust brewing ;P

The actual retreat is going to be a hell of an awesome read, of that I am positive, and I just can't wait. :) I have no control when it comes to your stories, I want to keep reading over and over again. :)

Anxiously waiting for more :) Tons of love,
-Lizzie :D

selizabetha01 March 15 2012, 18:36:37 UTC

I started re-reading this when I saw you were moving it over here, just to jog my memory, and I thought you should know that it has reminded me of how much I loved it in the first place (not that I ever really forgot).
Anyway, I really do love this and I'm so looking forwards to the next chapter!

aj81writing March 15 2012, 18:50:03 UTC

Yep, at least part of my old review could be repeated here : P

"Brilliant writing, as always. Jules and Brady "Wolf" had me giggling, as did "'everyday spy needs.'" : ) I like that they cleared up some of their old misunderstandings and that it just complicated things even more : ) Soooo looking forward to following their journey : )"

Can't wait for chapter 7, hun. Yay!!! *jumping up and down* *well, actually I'm on the couch with my laptop in my lap (oddly enough) so I'm only jumping up and down on the inside* *but still jumping up and down*

mridul777 March 15 2012, 19:30:10 UTC

Their interactions are getting hotter and passionate by the minute... Damon's explanation helped Elena, as could be understood from her demeanor ...

I think Elena and Stefan relationship is one of those safe and sound relationships that is practical and normal, love is there, but the fact that she has MUCH deeper feelings for Damon and he has for her too, is thoroughly visible.

I fervently hope that the marriage retreat turns out to be MUCH MUCH more than JUST a story for them...

That kiss was very much perfect.... Kinda like the kiss I shared in my icon... The Epic Kiss if this Year.... :)

PS: I was listening to this song today... and I felt like this song sorta expresses the feelings of Elena had for Damon in her teenage days and now... I don't know if it is appropriate for this story or not... BUT I felt like it can work for this one but MUCH MORE properly for "Kiss Me Break My Heart".... the song has some lines which is appropriate for this story, but the whole of is perfect for relaying Elena's feelings in the story "Kiss Me ( ... )

muselovearts March 15 2012, 21:28:56 UTC

OMG! Love this story!! You are an amazing writer, so much so that I actually feel what they are feeling! Crazy I know! lol :)As much as I hate "bad" Damon...he is still good!! I just can't hate him!!! Love the kiss the first time I read it, loved it the 2nd time! I can just imagine the whole town going crazy if they find out it was Damon who stood her up. Those 2 are great together. Love everything about this story, plot, characters, ect...I can't wait for more Chapies!! lol Have been going nuts since I read it on FF, was sad that you moved it but happy that you are continuing it! Keep up the great work! Love all your work!