Bet Me; Chapter 6; Introducing Mr and Mrs Reynolds

[loveepiclove]

Here we are at Day 7 with the first new chapter of Bet Me in over 8 months. To say I’m nervous about re-launching this fic is an understatement. To those of you who’ve followed me over from FF, I thank you. To those of you who’ve commented, PMed me, and tweeted your support, I thank you. I’m writing outside my comfort zone, and I need my loyal/

Comments

[aj81writing]

Sizzling.
I think one of my favorite descriptions of yours in this story(aside from the one on Mason, of course) is this "He was dressed like an orange fruit loop, but he had presence." LOL
Also LOL at the 'other movies' were Die Hard and Police Academy. Brilliant.
Looking forward to your next chappie, hun <3

[loveepiclove]

Thanks, I love that description too; my favorite, bar the Mason one.

[parnassides]

Squeeeeee :D. I'm super excited for this new chapter to be up!

I love love love it so so much! The exploration of their new living quarters was brilliant. There were so many moments when I was laughing out loud, and the things they found in there have me brimming with anticipation for what's to come :D. And I can't wait to see how Von Gruber intends to rectify Damon and Elena's 'intimacy' problem. LOL.

The new characters you've introduced are great. Jules and Brady turning up has made an already tense situation even more difficult for our favourite couple. Caroline and Tyler are just hilarious, I love them both! And Klaus is great. He's funny, but also kind of terrifying at the same time.

There was some great development between Damon and Elena in this chapter too. I loved the slight hint of Jealous!Elena we saw at the beginning, and I loved Damon trying to reassure her again towards the end. And then that last paragraph was just brilliant. Now that Damon has realised how Elena feels, things are sure to get even more interesting!

[loveepiclove]

Thanks for all your help with this chapter. Your feedback was incredible. <333

[dutchess_sandra]

This chapter was so entertaining to read.

Those living quarters sound wonderful, and that cupboard filled with those roleplay outfits (loved the reference to the nurse's outfit) and stuff was a great addition - this is going to be fun.

Klaus's outfit had me laughing out loud, and so did Caroline's oversharing - so good to have her and Tyler there, too.

That final paragraph was great. The fact that Damon now realizes that her response to him is no act is going to be very interesting in the light of their "intimacy problems."

Looking forward to that couples bonding session!

[loveepiclove]

I'm glad you liked the little details in this. It's always great when someone notices that kind of stuff :)

[titeve79]

Yay! A brand new chapter. You just put sunshine on my cold rainy day. God I missed this story.

So... there's cameras in their room? I can't wait to see them 'acting' in there.

I've got the feeling it will be a long and difficult road for both of them but I'm sure they'll get through this.

There was no need to be nervous, this was an amazing chapter.

Take care,

Eve xo

[loveepiclove]

Thank you :) I'm really glad you liked this chapter.

[dreamssincerity]

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Things seem like they are about to become even more interesting :)

[loveepiclove]

Well I sure plan on them becoming more interesting :)