Bet Me; Chapter 7; Trust Issues

[loveepiclove]

A/N: Thank you to everyone who left me a comment on FF, and here for the last chapter. I've read every one of them at least twice LMAO. My intention was to reply to all of them by now, but I have been working round the clock, writing, and re-writing this chapter every spare second I've had. It's the longest chapter I've ever written. My aim was to

Comments

[rosesforever94]

I was so excited when I saw you updated! I love this story!

And wow, what a chapter! I loved every single word of it! The tension between them... I could almost feel it.

My favorite part, of course, was the scene in the end. There's no way she can keep denying that she's attracted to him now.

Fabulous chapter! Really well done!

I'm looking forward to read the next chapter!

xoxo

[lauren3210]

OMG this was AWESOME! I am literally speechless over how good this chapter is, I'm seriously trying so hard to come up with some expressions to describe my feelings and all my brain is coming up with is OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!!!! I loved it so so so fucking much! Everything, from the funny bits (potato sack, hahahaha) to the nervouse bits to Damon being frustrated and then the smut at the end and ohmygod, this was just so awesome! Oh, I've just thought of something else to say! Yay me! I just love how you've made Elena just as frustrating as she can be on the show with her refusal to admit her attraction to him. I kind of wanted to shake her, even though I understood her reticence completely. hey, look at that, my words have come back to me now! Okay, gonna go read it again and become speechless all over again!

[aj81writing]

Wow... just wow... smoldering, hun <3 Loved the trust exercise, too, and the way Damon was feeling around in the dark (well, since he was blindfolded, it was dark to him at least) which made me think of the elevator scene in I Love Trouble : )
Can't wait for your next chappie :)

[parnassides]

Eeeeep! Squeeeee! *happy dance*

And breathe.

Wow.

This was so good. You do such a good job of blending the humour, the tension and the sizzling attraction.

I love Damon being blindfolded, and feeling out of control, and the whole back and forth between them about whether the attraction is real or not. I don't know who I feel more sorry for - Elena, trying to convince Klaus that she is attracted to Damon whilst trying to convince Damon that she isn't attracted to him, or Damon, trying to convince Elena to admit that she is attracted to him! What I do know is that I love the whole situation :D And after that rather amazing ending, it seems Elena may no longer be in a position to deny anything anyway, which should prove very interesting! *smirks*

[lolaventimiglia]

Oooooh God, the end just killed me!!!! I was waiting for a new chapter and when I saw on Twitter that you posted it I was so happy!!!
I'm loving this story each time even more!!! And you're absolutely the queen when it comes to write about build up, sexual tension and expectations... It just seems as I'm able to "feel" the same emotions that the characters are feeling in the story... Elena is soooo Elena being all stubborn about what she feels about Damon, but in the end she totally showed how much she wants him, and , as always, Damon was right :P
I'm really curious about the next days and what Klaus will make them do XD
Oh, and tell me that she won't let Damon all alone with his "problem" during the whole night! He deserves something in return :P