Bet Me; Chapter 7; Trust Issues

Mar 29, 2012 00:01

A/N: Thank you to everyone who left me a comment on FF, and here for the last chapter. I've read every one of them at least twice LMAO. My intention was to reply to all of them by now, but I have been working round the clock, writing, and re-writing this chapter every spare second I've had. It's the longest chapter I've ever written. My aim was to ( Read more... )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

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dreamssincerity March 28 2012, 15:05:51 UTC
Uh-oh, Elena is in the deep waters o.O
Loved it :) I had this huge smile on my face when I saw you updated :D♥

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c1ashcityrocker March 28 2012, 15:28:09 UTC
Phew, that end scene was =HOT=! Especially from the build-up from the entire chapter (and pretty much the entire story) haha... I'm glad that Elena allowed him to go that far, but now I'm kinda worried that, in typical Elena-fashion, she's going to try twice as hard to push him away. "it cant ever happen again/heat of the moment/we're here for a job" etc etc ... I wonder what's going thru Damon's head right now... she totally just BAILED... i mean.. =ouch= lol. But at least he sort of knows Elena, and has a decent idea of what's going through her head.. sorta, anyway ( ... )

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jaimy818 March 28 2012, 15:39:50 UTC
Oh. My. God. Is it hot in here or is it them? Fabulous chapter, loved the tension and the smut at the end. Poor Damon still sporting his hard on. Lol. Very wet, I mean well done!

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dark_spn_angel March 28 2012, 16:02:03 UTC
OH MY!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

The private conversation in the woods, stolen kisses and their first night sharing a bed together were all fantastic!!! A major build-up of sexual tension is well on it's way...10 years overdue too!

You definitely captured the dynamic of Delena perfectly with Damon fully aware of their chemistry while Elena keeps denying it (like on the show!)

Good or bad, Klaus will be a miracle worker if his retreat exercises actually gets Delena to a point that they have no more secrets between one another...no more lies.

Awesome job!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!

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verdi_p March 28 2012, 16:05:22 UTC
Wow!
Damon was mature enough to tell her he's attracted to her. Good. Elena is rightfully against admit anything with anyone.
Von Gruber already understand their kind of relationship.
The end was hot. Elena has her release but poor Damon? XD
Now she cannot deny the attraction and she better admit it soon and start to cooperate...
Glad you update ;)
Another amazing chapter :)

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