Bet Me; Chapter 7; Trust Issues
A/N: Thank you to everyone who left me a comment on FF, and here for the last chapter. I've read every one of them at least twice LMAO. My intention was to reply to all of them by now, but I have been working round the clock, writing, and re-writing this chapter every spare second I've had. It's the longest chapter I've ever written. My aim was to
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I missed this unnerving, mindblowind sexual tension in a fic. No one can do it the way you do it.
This chapter was beyond amazing. Im so in love with this story.
And that last scene in the bathroom I can imagine her going "Oops what have I done" And poor poor Damon left with a a hard on, that was mean!
Incredible work Michelle
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That sexual tension was palpable! It literally leapt off the screen! You wrote their tension so, so well. Wow.
I loved that Elena was the one asking him not to stop. She can't deny the attraction any longer and I feel like it's only going to increase from here.
And I really don't mind authors not replying to reviews when they are busy writing! I'd rather have a new chapter, that's the best thank you. :D
Great, great job! It was so good!
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I could not believe I went "Awwwww!" and O_O at the end, even though I have read most of the chapter, you still surprise me! Not just the smut scene at the end, but the added blindfold section for Damon and the little plot planning in the evening during dinner and before bed time.
The smut scene at the end! O_o I never dream that you would go that far and certainly not expecting this from Elena when you told me she didn't has the best of reaction. lol
It is such an amazing chapter. Wow... just wow - as AJ said.
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This story drives me crazy! It's perfect!
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