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loveepiclove

The Party

Nov 29, 2011 22:21

Word Count: 1,440
A/N: Just something light and fluffy. Written in November '03, but tweaked today.

( The Party )

my fiction, short story

Comments 10

mridul777 November 29 2011, 12:13:29 UTC

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loveepiclove November 29 2011, 12:28:45 UTC

Lol. Thank you? <3

mridul777 November 29 2011, 12:32:01 UTC

Well.... I loved it... It was my kinda story.... I kinda can relate to Kristy so...
Yeah, brought back some stuff for me... :D

loveepiclove November 29 2011, 12:36:48 UTC

Thanks. I think it doesn't matter what our size, or our looks, we can feel fat and ugly and compare ourselves to other girls. But we're often our worst critics. I'm glad you liked it :-) Thanks for always reading.

aj81writing November 29 2011, 15:35:50 UTC

I'm so happy you've started to publish your own fiction here - and this is SO different from the other one, you are really a broad-spectrum writer. : ) You've captured all that awkwardness so well, I can totally picture it. The way your friends push you out of your comfort zone and you start to believe that 'yes, maybe I'm not so bad-looking, maybe I can lose that weight, maybe he will notice me' and then something happens, someone looks at you and all the insecurities come rushing back, even if it was not at all criticism they meant.. (wow, my English is exceptional today! LOL but you know what I mean ( ... )

loveepiclove November 29 2011, 19:29:26 UTC

Well, if this story got you reminiscing that's a good thing :)

Pleased you could picture all that awkwardness. I think being a teenager is hard enough, and when you add these types of insecurities it's even harder..

Finally... lokya2046 November 29 2011, 18:45:42 UTC

I got the chance to read this. Not sure why I didn't get an alert for this.

The piece is written 5 months after the other and it is almost completely different. You captured those feelings very well, as aj said, and I think I can trace the similarity between this and your writings nowadays.

You are a great romance writer, and it seems like you really like high school romance. :)

Re: Finally... loveepiclove November 29 2011, 19:24:50 UTC

Haha, yes I do like high school romance :) I don't even know why I wrote this, but it was fun, and fluffy, and yes maybe the start of me writing romance LOL.

Thanks for reading.

ciara2531 November 30 2011, 00:08:19 UTC

Aww! That was sweet! You captured the awkward self awareness and self doubt that all teenage girls go through really well. Loving these little bits of your original stuff. :-)

loveepiclove December 1 2011, 13:00:37 UTC

Thanks. I have 1 or 2 really heavy pieces I'm contemplating putting up, so I thought I'd put this piece of fluff up to.