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loveepiclove

Bet Me; Chapter 3; The Story. It's All For The Story.

Mar 13, 2012 22:54

A/N: Day 4. I was thoroughly entertained reading your responses to the last chapter. I think I felt better reading them this time round, LOL. I've had some interesting thoughts and reflections as I've been re-reading this story. There have been moments I've thought about changing, but since not everyone is re-reading, I decided not to do that. We ( Read more... )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

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aj81writing March 13 2012, 12:02:38 UTC

Again, I have to use my old review :)

"Love how the town rallies to avenge Elena. No Mr. Big Shot for Mystic Falls, huh? : )

"some bronzed nitwit with too many muscles and a head that was too small" LOL at what was totally Damon's description of Mason."

I also, which I apparently forgot to mention last time around, LOVE the rivalry between them, and how they're both so attracted to each other, fighting it all the way. Looking forward to your next chappie <3

loveepiclove March 13 2012, 12:14:35 UTC

I thank you for recycling your old reviews. For some reason they make me feel less bad about the fact you're reviewing twice. Hahaha.

I think I have shared with you, that Damon's line about Mason is possible my most favorite of all the lines I've written. LOL.

dreamssincerity March 13 2012, 12:42:17 UTC

Ha ha, here's Elena with the bet :D

crazilyaddicted March 13 2012, 14:24:54 UTC

Well, he got off too easily if u ask me. Despite the six speeding tickets (LOVE it!) Hmmpf! But i get Elena's logic behind it too. Why shud SHE lose out on the story shes wanted forever just cuz she hates his guts, huh?

I also LOVE the latent sexual tension between these two. (Of course, Damon's STILL an ass for doing what he did to her and then still showing an interest in her, but we'll ignore that for now.) I cant wait to see how they get along together...and i especially cant wait to see how they interact at the retreat. I can just foresee incredibly interesting things in their future, esp with having to pretend for a week that they're working on making their relationship better. With all the buried feelings coming up to the fore, it shud make for a hell of an interesting week! :)

Cant wait for the next chapter... :)

mridul777 March 13 2012, 14:30:24 UTC

Firstly... My lady.... yours are such stories that.... incites such reactions in your readers which are akin to...umm how shall I put it....

Ahh..exactly!

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mak75231 March 13 2012, 15:57:39 UTC

"It should have not made her pulse skitter and jump, and sent heat to places he wouldn't get near in this lifetime, or the next ten." Methinks the couples bonding exercises will have her rethinking that idea! Love the whole town is punishing Damon for shortcutting Elena--6 tickets! Bwahaaa! They neither one realize why they're fighting each other so hard--priceless! Melody seems like a real trouble-maker who'll feed either one of them info just to stir things up. Yeah, she'd better read up on what's required before she decides her "friends with benefits" relationship with Stefan is gonna withstand this undercover op. And the BET at the end--perfection!