Bad Habits

[lovegrapefruit]

Title: Bad Habits
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Romance, fluff
Author's Note: I wanted to write about Jinki's lip-chewing habit, so this just seeped out of my brain ^^'

I glance over at you and you're doing it again; chewing on your lip like no tomorrow. I just can't help but notice since you seem to be doing it more frequently lately. We're at

Comments

[dabadubu08]

kyaaa so fluffy!
"Good, but you aren't allowed to do that anymore. Your lips are mine,"
my favorite line!!!! kyaaaa
uhm actually, all of these are my favorite >,

[lovegrapefruit]

hehehe thank you so much for your cute comment ^^

[omiichan]

ah yes, that habit.. i dont really realize it before actually but after read the summary, i tried to do it lol.. i meant idk, thats feel weird maybe bcoz thats not my habit --"

anyway~~ cuteee~ >w<
like on the couch scene but of course more love into the bed scene xDDD~

"My lips taste that good?" instantly smile and still smiling after remember it again xDDD

cant wait for more onkey >w<~~ <3

[lovegrapefruit]

hehe, I see Onew do it all the time and realize that I have that same bad habit as him... .___. so I wanted to write this hehe

thank youuu <3

[axel1409]

aww~~ just love how you put what Kibum feels into words like this part 'I sighed slightly, but couldn't ignore the slight increase in the tempo of my heart, resting my head gently on top of yours as I succumbed to the sleep as well.' and Jinki's 'Your eyes opened up a bit more with me by your side, giving me a smile as your laid down on my lap, eyes closing again.' this part! ^^ love it. looking forward for ur next one~

[lovegrapefruit]

awww, thank you so much for the kind comment! ToT

[heedictatorwife]

yay! you're back! XD
i dunno, i just miss reading from you.. XD

[heedictatorwife]

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THIS IS JUST SO FLUFFY. IDE.

"I know, babe. And trust me, without you I'd be way worse than this."
DAMMIT! LEE JINKI! WHY ARE YOU SO CHEESY?
YOU'RE NOT ONLY AFFECTING KIBUM'S HEART WITH YOUR CHEESINESS, MY HEART IS AFFECTED TOO!
MINE TOO! MINEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
BUT I KNOW I AM NO MATCH AGAINST THE IRRESISTIBLE DIVA..

<3 THIS FIC SO MUCH..
mem-ing this~
and btw, sorry for the caps abuse, i was just suffering from FLUFF ATTACK and that's one of its manifestation..

[lovegrapefruit]

awww, I'm glad you like my fics! <333 sorry I can't write as much T___T

and thank you so much. hehe your comment is awesome xD btw what is mem-ing? xDDD

[heedictatorwife]

it's saving in to the 'memories' tab of my LJ..
it's like personal bookmarking so whenever I want to read it again, it could be readily accessible in my LJ~ :D

there's a tab in the upper part saying 'memories' so yeah, i mem-ed it~ XD

[playingods]

so fluffy and cuuuute ♥ onkey is just amazing and that chewing lip habit is just plain cute ok

[lovegrapefruit]

hehe thank you so much! <3