DAY 12: Your Lips Pressed To My Neck

Feb 12, 2013 12:09

Title: Your Lips Pressed To My Neck
Written by: officiallykris
Pairing: Lu Han/Lay
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language
Summary: Yixing is not so good at keeping secrets. But that turns out to be not such a bad thing.

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pairing: lay/lu han, valentine's day, rating: pg-13

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anonymous February 12 2013, 18:20:35 UTC
this was awesome ;~~;

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_firstclassmail February 13 2013, 00:46:36 UTC
i dont like this luhan i hate it i hate him he is so SOLID UGH AND SEXY
but i like this yixing i will touch him in the face. this is actually how i characterise him :CCC
but for some reason i see him as much smaller here! like as if he was 171cm. SOMETHING ABOUT THE DESCRIPTION makes luhan seem HUGE....

anyway thanks <3

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hipployta February 13 2013, 01:52:35 UTC
I think Zitao was hinting that Luhan already knew Yixing dear...but you're oblivious to your inability to keep secrets.

That was a lovely ending

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reduxed February 13 2013, 02:52:48 UTC
ah this was such a lovely lovely lovely read, i really like the dynamics you brought out here and how lu han is the brick wall to yixing's little sad self aww ;~; thank you for writing this!

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mangafanxd February 13 2013, 02:53:50 UTC
;alskfjsldkjfsldfjs this was lovely. I mean, lovely in your descriptions and wordings, but also an mad kind of way? I got a sort of general angry, hurtful vibe from the characters (esp. yixing) and man, it was intense. very nice~

and of course layhan. always layhan <3

almost afraid to see how the black day fic will go haha

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