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lovekibummie

Teach me how to fuck

Oct 23, 2011 00:12

Title: Teach me how to fuck
Author: lovekibummie
Pairing: KyuMin
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Incest, Smut
Summary: Their parents told them to teach Kyuhyun whatever he needs to learn, they’re just obeying them.
A/N: My first fail attempt of writing yaoi smut. -.- So yeah, suggestion and comments please. I know it’s not that good so tell me how to ( Read more... )

fic::teachmehowtofuck, pairing::kyu`min

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lovekibummie October 24 2011, 17:19:11 UTC

hahaha.. good point.. i'll think about making another one will their first night together.. :p
but yeah.. since i'm having a hard time making this i might not be able to make it.. TT
and rolf dog house are supposed to be outside the house not beside kyumin's room!! XD

lucifiel07 October 24 2011, 16:52:15 UTC

beibeh, hey you! bakit parang di na ako updated sayo at akala ko ba di ka na mgbabasa ng smut, at gumawa ka pa. I miss you already! nakawin ko muna to ha, I'll read later :) ILY!

lovekibummie October 24 2011, 17:20:01 UTC

kakapost ko lang nito beibeh.. and yeah.. i lessen my smut readings..
i just try this out cause this plot always bugs my innocent mind.. lol.. ily...

immortalsoul123 October 25 2011, 15:51:07 UTC

aba kilala kita ah hahahahha

/lurking

a101203 October 24 2011, 16:52:19 UTC

THIS IS SUPER GOOD OMG
i wonder what if KyuMin parents found out that their son is loving each other and like to making love XDD

lovekibummie October 24 2011, 17:20:39 UTC

they won't found out.. that will spoil the fun and this will be angst.. -.- lol..

suju4life October 24 2011, 22:46:42 UTC

This is rally good! I love the story line and the smut is amazing, and honestly the only thing that I think this needs more of is more storyline~ because the sorry line is so original and interesting, I'd like to see more so when it gets to the smut, you can really feel all the emotions ^^ but I love your writing style and i hope to see more from you soon :)

lovekibummie October 25 2011, 08:17:07 UTC

weee... thank you very much... ^^
i'll try to write more.. :p

suju15_4life October 25 2011, 04:24:15 UTC

OMG OMG OMG you gave us smutty yaoi incest Kyumin! =D
Yesssssssssssss! My life is complete! Ok sorta I still have to meet Kyu and Min in person, but who knows when that will happen...>.>

Anywho, at least I can die happy knowing Min and Kyu did it with each other! ;DDDDD

lovekibummie October 25 2011, 08:18:22 UTC

hahahahahaha... we still need to see them getting though!! XD