hey, my sun-eyed girl (i've landed) [ fic ]

[lovelyable]

hey, my sun-eyed girl
cl/seungri | pg-13, 2459 words, canon
crushes can crush you.

for pause and envoler with this prompt. originally posted here, 09/20/2010.

Comments

[lovelyable]

ahhhh I ALWAYS LOOK FWD TO YOUR REVIEWS :3 i love how long and detailed they are. AND IT'S TOTALLY OKAY, i know school has started up and fic.... shouldn't be a priority when your'e busy (stalking boys in jerseys. HAHA JK

[lovelyable]

i was worried the last line was a little too cliche, so thank you! :)

[anonymous]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ i love the way you got seungri down here. a little bumbling and not being able to respond quickly to jests. i adored the chaerin-seungri interactions because if i imagined them to fall, i would think of it like this, just like how this played out. the part with the other big bang boys trying to set him up with hara and all the other girls was such a wonderful scene to add. their disbelief and seungri's firmness on the subject. i can't even. ♥ the soda and the dieting and the teddy-part. it was such a great read and i really enjoyed it all the way through. :)

the gd-centric one with vacations. just so utterly perfect! rocketships. ROCKETSHIPS! thank you so much for sharing! i hope you'll write more in the future and climb out of this writer-block-hole. ♥

[lovelyable]

it's great to know i am not too off-target with how i'm attempting seungri! i always feel like i'm bordering on making him into a ~special~ child so it's good that he appeared to be in character :D and i'm really flattered that you liked the progression of their relationship!

YES, ROCKETSHIPS 8D originally i had another joke relating to it at the end but i decided not to overdo the metaphor lmao. thanks so much for the well wishes and for the review :) :)

[essyllus]

awwwwwwwwww seungri :( i actually feel bad for him... LMAO
but really T T seungri... the ending ♥

[lovelyable]

LOL. is this a rare occurrence in your life?

thank youuu amandaaaa i'm happy you liked it :D

[essyllus]

feeling sorry for seungri? hm... considering that i don't really like him and i usually feel more pity toward him than sympathy... yes this is a rare occurrence.

what are your feelings towards seungri >>

[lovelyable]

i think the only time i really like him is when i'm writing him, or when a fellow writer and i are constructing a fic and deciding what role he'd play in it/what his character would be like. seungri's characteristics are so extreme and weird that it's great for fic. in fic, you get to decide what to do with it, his motivations for why he acts the way he does, and how to make them endearing and how to sculpt it around a situation that would make him likeable whereas in real life you have no control over it and when he does something obnoxious or acts the way he does, it's just irritating rather than cute, if that makes sense lol. but in general i have waves of liking seungri, waves where i hate him, IT DEPENDS. he's one of my favorite characters to write, though :

[peligr0]

chaerin grins over the rim of her mug. "thanks, oppa."

it's the first time seungri misses being seungri-yah.
^ awwwww seungri-yah

[lovelyable]

i'm the only one who ships clseungri i think :'( but i'm happy you ended up liking it anyway, hehe. and the gd-centric one as well. i'm glad i'm your foray into big bang fic again! thanks for the review.