so happy i could die [ fic ]

May 26, 2011 22:27

happy together, part 1
gd/top | r, 4229 words, canon
imagine me and you, i do.

i can't see me loving nobody but you for all my life. )

fic, fic: pairing :: gtop

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whetstone May 27 2011, 04:49:49 UTC
ok well hopefully this is the first comment!!

so, things i like (besides everything) gd's hamtaro hair (akdlgjsg), the whole conversation with titty fucking because it's so immature and boyish and totally something they would do, top's little dig about gd not being recognized in the nissan (lmao)...i'm just going to totally digress and freak out about the whole scene after the movie premiere. i love that it's not gd pining after disaffected top, it's him knowing what their relationship is, its toxicity, and hating it even as he goes chasing after it because he can't stay away. i am a terrible person but i love it

also just the way you handle the back-and-forth swing of their relationship in these tiny snippets and still have it feel real, and top's pov (detailed but not too detailed, blunt and kind of standoffish but melty in all the places it would be) is perfecttttugh.

anyway so glad i made you watch this movie and that i am apparently a bully, bc then i wouldn't have this gloriosity to read. ♥ I WANT THE NEXT PART. :D

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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:37:10 UTC
I JUST LOVE YOU A LOT sobs cries dramatics ♥

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whetstone May 28 2011, 22:17:11 UTC

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lovelyable May 29 2011, 04:54:00 UTC

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idk_ok May 27 2011, 05:00:08 UTC
What the fuck, I hate you, this is so perfect. I HAVEN'T EVEN FINISHED YET AND I ALREADY NEED TO COMMENT.

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idk_ok May 27 2011, 05:16:58 UTC
OH MY GOD. WHAT IS THIS? THIS IS SO PERFECT? CHARACTERIZATION & THE ANGST AND IT WAS SO PERFECTLY WRITTEN, SO PERFECT. SO PERFECTTTTTTTTTTTTT.

This may be my favourite gtop fic ever, and lord knows I've read every single one in this comm.


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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:42:24 UTC
omg :3 not obnoxious!! i am actually highly flattered, thank you :')


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lovelyable May 28 2011, 00:01:54 UTC
screams omg i am not worthy ♥

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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:43:54 UTC
;___; thank you!

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marked_for_life May 27 2011, 05:28:58 UTC
and now this song will be stuck in my head forever. i loved everything about this from the change in moods and the non-chronological order to the car-ride to somewherenowhere in japan and the giggling and immaturity of "titty fucking". it added to the sense of their fucked-up see-saw of a relationship. i hate when you write fics like this because you make me believe in a version of gtop that i can imagine but would rather not think about because i'm all about sap and schmaltz. but there's still part two so i'm gonna hope for unicorns and rainbows.

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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:48:07 UTC
AHAHAH i'm sorry, it just fit so well. and i'm with you, lately i'm in love with cutecontenthappy gtop, unfortunately i was too inspired by this movie :( i'm still going back and forth between the ending... but thanks so much for reading regardless!

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marked_for_life May 28 2011, 05:26:31 UTC
well, i hope you're inspired by the song and the cute movie "imagine me & you" for the end :D

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lovelyable May 29 2011, 04:55:59 UTC
hmm i've never seen that movie before. it looks interesting though, so i'm going to dl it... and then we shall see haha :D thanks for the rec!

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drunkenvampire May 27 2011, 05:37:43 UTC
omg i love it!!! i need more!!

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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:48:23 UTC
thanks :D

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