Comments | lovelyable: so happy i could die [ fic ]

lovelyable

so happy i could die [ fic ]

May 26, 2011 22:27

happy together, part 1
gd/top | r, 4229 words, canon
imagine me and you, i do.

( i can't see me loving nobody but you for all my life. )

fic, fic: pairing :: gtop

Comments 52

corpuscallos_m May 27 2011, 07:11:43 UTC

omg this is... amazing.

there are so many little details in this that love. the way you summarize things is perfect and to a point while at the same time strikes a chord in me. your writing just flows really well and I envy that.

I love how you've portrayed their relationship. the characterization is really good. I like how they're both stubborn in their own ways and both have complexities that neither can overlook.

/waits patiently for part 2. :3

lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:50:45 UTC

thanks for the compliments! hope part 2 doesn't disappoint.

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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:55:36 UTC

:D i'm happy that everything came off the way it was supposed to, hopefully it's not reading too melodramatically. and i don't believe gd or top can ever quit each other... is my bias showing... anyway, thank you :o)

nulka17 May 27 2011, 07:55:53 UTC

Oh sweet baby Jesus.
I want more more more, for sure. :D
This is absolutely fantastic!
Listen to the song by the way and with it tastes like sugarplums and cherries dipped in warm chocolade.

lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:56:27 UTC

i think the song is nice because it gives this kind of an ironic twist :D thank you!

spot! dyealer May 27 2011, 08:58:15 UTC

their relationship is so fucked up!I feel bad for both of them and also a little bit more on JiYong side cuz he is being rejected there!
It seems to go well for them then the second time it all seems to go for the wrong turn..
I cant wait for your next part! :)

Re: spot! lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:57:09 UTC

thank you :)

laurasljn May 27 2011, 09:01:29 UTC

I loved this part :"Before that, Seunghyun had made Jiyong laugh at the rest stop. Jiyong wove their fingers together from the stretch of road between Ichikawa and Funabashi, when they were still sure they were en route. The night before that, Jiyong had crawled into his bed. They'd laid kissing for a long time and then Jiyong had curled into him and slid his hand underneath Seunghyun's shirt, cold fingers stinging his belly like a reminder that he was there. Before that they hadn't talked for a week.

Why? Seunghyun doesn't remember." <33333