so happy i could die [ fic ]

May 26, 2011 22:27

happy together, part 1
gd/top | r, 4229 words, canon
imagine me and you, i do.

i can't see me loving nobody but you for all my life. )

fic, fic: pairing :: gtop

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irm_cik May 27 2011, 11:39:12 UTC
oh gosh u liked this veeeeery much!!!

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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:58:30 UTC
thanks :)

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jiyonglikesme May 27 2011, 13:46:57 UTC
you know, I have a thing for Ji and Hyun fighting scene these days, not sure why, but it's just.. and this is just.. OMG! the lines from them, the situations,, sigh.. can't write anything more. this is GREAT!

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lovelyable May 27 2011, 23:59:35 UTC
haha, gtop being dramallamas is pretty appealing. thank you!

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snoaz May 27 2011, 17:34:29 UTC
I love your writing, it's so gorgeous; the way you tell a lot through little snippets and details. Like this: Except Jiyong's hair is in his eyes and Seunghyun is suddenly remembering how he kept knocking Jiyong's hat off during the fight scene earlier in the day, and how every time he helped Jiyong put it back on, he'd comb his hair back and his fingers would graze Jiyong's cheek and Jiyong would smile, almost giddy.

Canon stories are always the best, and that combined with your talent in writing and firm grips on their characters, makes that I can't wait for the next part!

♥♥

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lovelyable May 28 2011, 00:00:42 UTC
eee yay, i'm glad you liked that part :D i'm happy you liked it, thank you!

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lovelyable May 29 2011, 04:56:49 UTC
omg, love your comment ♥ thanks so much :)

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la_geni May 28 2011, 11:53:35 UTC
I really, really, really like this. I'm pretty incoherent when I like something so this is the best you'll get from me.

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lovelyable May 29 2011, 04:57:03 UTC
thank you!

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