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Siempre Hay Algo Más - Chapter 9

May 23, 2011 17:56

Title: Siempre Hay Algo Más
Rating: R
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

A/N: I know, I know...an update in less than a week!? Color me just as surprised! This chapter obviously involves the now-famous Communion...I hope I did the scene justice.

( 'cause when you're standing oh so near, I kinda lose my mind )

siempre hay algo mas, fanfic

Comments 20

szairmz May 24 2011, 03:10:11 UTC

Oh God!
That was awesome.
I'm so glad that it was Silvia who came to that realization and acted on it.
I'm squeeing now, that kiss conveys so many emotions.
Love, trust, adoration, acceptance.
And I can't wait for the dinner to take place!!!
You rock!!

Yay, squeeage! lovelyafterglow May 25 2011, 01:01:59 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, I think it definitely had to be Silvia who made the first step...good thing she finally did.

(I totally do rock. :-P)

selinakris May 24 2011, 09:51:02 UTC

Ooh, that was good, Can't wait to read what happens next.
Though not looking forward to the bit where it all falls apart.

lovelyafterglow May 25 2011, 00:42:45 UTC

Ha, yeeeaah...I'm not looking forward to that bit either!

reiimy97 May 24 2011, 11:26:24 UTC

'Something was different between them...and she realized she liked it.' Yes! Go Go Silvia!

lovelyafterglow May 25 2011, 00:43:47 UTC

;-) She's getting there!

ms_moodified May 24 2011, 17:11:33 UTC

Awwww, lovely, this chapter was incredibly beautiful. Not only did you do the scene justice, you gave us that scene! The scene all of us, PepSi nuts, have been wondering about for years, and girl, did you deliver!

It was so sweet. The moment in which Silvia realized what she was feeling for Pepa, and Pepa doubting what was going on, sooo sweet. I love this fic so much. *grabs tissue box*

I'm glad to see things are also moving forward in the present, I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. But, I'm not going to be greedy and ask for another promptly update, I'm not, I'm not, no way, nuh-uh... please?? *smiles innocently*

p.s: I haven't forgotten, I'm totally living up to my end of the bargain, I'll update later tonight. Promise! ;)

lovelyafterglow May 25 2011, 00:58:29 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad it all came together so well, and that their feelings came through. "Beautiful" and "sweet" used to describe the scene? *is happy*

Yup, things are starting to look up in the present, eh? We'll just have to see if it continues that way...:-P

p.s. Oooh, yay! And, pff, I'm sure the chapter will be great! Although, are you gonna start ratcheting up the angst soon?? I need to know if I gotta start preparing myself for it.

lovelyafterglow May 26 2011, 00:10:10 UTC

Has tonight not gotten here yet? :-( *pout*

Sorry, sorry, sorry... ms_moodified May 26 2011, 00:28:41 UTC

I'm so sorry! I had technical difficulties yesterday (meaning I fell asleep while editing the chapter) *blushes*. But it's updated now, freshly updated! ;)

Oh, and the angst is coming, you can see its ugly head lurking in the near future. Prepare yourself!

bsofthewest May 24 2011, 19:34:37 UTC

Yes, I am sure that's just how it happened!
and
"Pepa finally turned around to walk out, throwing the redhead one last smile over her shoulder as she shut the door behind her." How well we know that look!..and how we miss it!

lovelyafterglow May 25 2011, 01:05:05 UTC

Haha, for real. There was definitely a very clear image in my head for that bit. Pepa tossing one last flirty/loving look as she makes her way out of the Lab of Love is practically a PepSi classic!