I loved it, I loved it very much ^^. I can't really write much more because I'm still feeling kind drugged out from all the medicines and my mind is fuzzy but I just wanted to let you know I loved it.
Aww, Jen, thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment when you are not feeling well. I hope you and the sneezing kitty are now snuggled up in bed or on the couch and that the cold is receding. *hugs*
I really liked this chapter. I like the formatting and the daily planner at the beginning. I like the whole story, but I really liked how this chapter flowed.
Thank you! I wanted to do something where I lay out a whole week, and then I thought I could include a picture instead of typing it all up, so this is where the daily planner came from.
Just. Ando secretly being a golf master and kicking Takeshi's ass and messing up his swing over and over again with hard questions and how that pisses Takeshi off but also gives him SOMEONE to talk to about everything that's been making him lock himself away.
And then they get drunk together! Ahahaha! That is a thing that I NEVER imagined happening!
“You also told me that while Rei was the love of your life, all the boys - and I am quoting - got to love Usagi because she is so cute. Takeshi agreed.”Bahaha. And then she wears her hair in odango. Brilliant
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Spirit, your comment is as long as some of the fics I write. *blinks* OH MY GOD, THIS ABSOLUTELY MAKES MY DAY! YOU BASICALLY WROTE AN ON RAZOR'S EDGE ESSAY!!!!
Just. Ando secretly being a golf master and kicking Takeshi's ass and messing up his swing over and over again with hard questions and how that pisses Takeshi off but also gives him SOMEONE to talk to about everything that's been making him lock himself away. Ando is always good for a suprise. Takeshi thought he'd own him on the golf course, but no such luck. Even if he doesn't distract the other players, Ando really is quite good. Plus, Takeshi really, really needs someone to talk you and as chance has it, on that particular Saturday, it's Ando.
And then they get drunk together! Ahahaha! That is a thing that I NEVER imagined happening! Safe to say, neither did Takeshi.
And serious tiem now, I really enjoyed seeing a bit more of Takeshi's perspective of what is happening. How this seems to be inevitably steering them back to being what they were, and to him, it feels like
( ... )
That's because I REALLY love Razor's Edge and V isn't here to write essays so I have to do it in her place.
Even if he doesn't distract the other players, Ando really is quite good.
It makes sense, what with Ando's wealthy parents. He's so determined to ignore his past that it's easy to forget that he had a privileged upbringing.
Kunzite was a politician and a warrior, and neither occupation allowed him much of a private life.
So here we are once again at the question of whether Takeshi will be horrified at the idea of becoming a politician again like Umino would like.
I think Setsuna - through her role as the guardian of time and space - is less attached to her civilian form than the others.This makes sense, too. Since her role as a senshi never really stopped, whereas the others haven't really had to continue it during the whole Airmail storyline. That's what makes it so jarring, though, is we're so used to seeing your characters almost completely sans magic. Even though lots of magic is going on with Usagi and Mamoru, both
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I'm going to be late for class right now but really wanted to tell you how I felt before I go brain dead in lecture.
ANDO, WHY ARE YOU SO PERFECT? WHY AREN'T YOU IN MY LIFE. I absolutely love this. Yes, to the messing up Takeshi's game and yes to getting Takeshi drunk! I love how Minako wants to tease him and Takeshi.
I want to give everybody a hug. Except for maybe Takeshi right now. I feel like he would punch someone if he's hungover. And only hugging Ando after he showers. But especially Usagi. I love how she has horrible girly taste. I love how she's the food fairy! Can she live with me please? I want to wake up to food made for me. It's going to be a lonnnggg time before I ever get breakfast in bed.
I also love how Ami gives Ando bad information. Does Ami ever have wrong information?? Rei must have been so amused. But I'm glad she's a good sport about it.
AND OMG THEY FINALLY GET SOMEWHERE. hehehe definitely squeeing about the kiss.
Oh wow, thank you! I hope you weren't too late for class, but at the same time, I'm positively delighted that you liked this chapter so much that it made you run late.
ANDO, WHY ARE YOU SO PERFECT? WHY AREN'T YOU IN MY LIFE. I think you and Charlie can be chairwomen of the Ando Tanaka fan club. :D
Except for maybe Takeshi right now. I feel like he would punch someone if he's hungover. That is a very astute and accurate assessment of his character. Maybe, just maybe, he'd let you make him a cup of tea.
Does Ami ever have wrong information?? Rei must have been so amused. Ami is such a cutie, but she has her mind on other things, medical things, big things, so her memory process would go like this: nice evening with Rei - last time we had curry - answer to question about which food she likes -> curry.
Thank you so much for writing! Thank YOU for reading and commenting, this always makes my day!
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Just. Ando secretly being a golf master and kicking Takeshi's ass and messing up his swing over and over again with hard questions and how that pisses Takeshi off but also gives him SOMEONE to talk to about everything that's been making him lock himself away.
And then they get drunk together! Ahahaha! That is a thing that I NEVER imagined happening!
“You also told me that while Rei was the love of your life, all the boys - and I am quoting - got to love Usagi because she is so cute. Takeshi agreed.”Bahaha. And then she wears her hair in odango. Brilliant ( ... )
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OH MY GOD, THIS ABSOLUTELY MAKES MY DAY! YOU BASICALLY WROTE AN ON RAZOR'S EDGE ESSAY!!!!
Just. Ando secretly being a golf master and kicking Takeshi's ass and messing up his swing over and over again with hard questions and how that pisses Takeshi off but also gives him SOMEONE to talk to about everything that's been making him lock himself away.
Ando is always good for a suprise. Takeshi thought he'd own him on the golf course, but no such luck. Even if he doesn't distract the other players, Ando really is quite good. Plus, Takeshi really, really needs someone to talk you and as chance has it, on that particular Saturday, it's Ando.
And then they get drunk together! Ahahaha! That is a thing that I NEVER imagined happening! Safe to say, neither did Takeshi.
And serious tiem now, I really enjoyed seeing a bit more of Takeshi's perspective of what is happening. How this seems to be inevitably steering them back to being what they were, and to him, it feels like ( ... )
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Even if he doesn't distract the other players, Ando really is quite good.
It makes sense, what with Ando's wealthy parents. He's so determined to ignore his past that it's easy to forget that he had a privileged upbringing.
Kunzite was a politician and a warrior, and neither occupation allowed him much of a private life.
So here we are once again at the question of whether Takeshi will be horrified at the idea of becoming a politician again like Umino would like.
I think Setsuna - through her role as the guardian of time and space - is less attached to her civilian form than the others.This makes sense, too. Since her role as a senshi never really stopped, whereas the others haven't really had to continue it during the whole Airmail storyline. That's what makes it so jarring, though, is we're so used to seeing your characters almost completely sans magic. Even though lots of magic is going on with Usagi and Mamoru, both ( ... )
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ANDO, WHY ARE YOU SO PERFECT? WHY AREN'T YOU IN MY LIFE.
I absolutely love this. Yes, to the messing up Takeshi's game and yes to getting Takeshi drunk! I love how Minako wants to tease him and Takeshi.
I want to give everybody a hug. Except for maybe Takeshi right now. I feel like he would punch someone if he's hungover. And only hugging Ando after he showers. But especially Usagi. I love how she has horrible girly taste. I love how she's the food fairy! Can she live with me please? I want to wake up to food made for me. It's going to be a lonnnggg time before I ever get breakfast in bed.
I also love how Ami gives Ando bad information. Does Ami ever have wrong information?? Rei must have been so amused. But I'm glad she's a good sport about it.
AND OMG THEY FINALLY GET SOMEWHERE. hehehe definitely squeeing about the kiss.
Thank you so much for writing!
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ANDO, WHY ARE YOU SO PERFECT? WHY AREN'T YOU IN MY LIFE.
I think you and Charlie can be chairwomen of the Ando Tanaka fan club. :D
Except for maybe Takeshi right now. I feel like he would punch someone if he's hungover.
That is a very astute and accurate assessment of his character. Maybe, just maybe, he'd let you make him a cup of tea.
Does Ami ever have wrong information?? Rei must have been so amused.
Ami is such a cutie, but she has her mind on other things, medical things, big things, so her memory process would go like this:
nice evening with Rei - last time we had curry - answer to question about which food she likes -> curry.
Thank you so much for writing!
Thank YOU for reading and commenting, this always makes my day!
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