Fic: On Razor's Edge - Interlude

Mar 28, 2012 16:00

Title: On Razor's Edge - Interlude
A/N: Many thanks to Charlie and Spirit for their help! The previous chapter is here.

Enjoy. )

characters: ensemble, verse: airmail, fandom: sailor moon

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mrcrybrilliance March 28 2012, 14:27:31 UTC
There was no Mercury/Zoisite in this :( But at least they're the happiest, well one of the happiest, couples in the present.

OMG I just want to hug them all.

Except Kunzite, I kind of want to smack him.

I like the insight into the SilMil. Very well done (as always)!

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:19:09 UTC
I know I've been saying this for ages, but I have something really good, really big for Umino and Ami planned within the next two chapters.

Thanks for commenting, dear, I really appreciate it, and like you, I'd want to smack Kunzite. Silly man is doing all the wrong things.

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mrcrybrilliance May 2 2012, 18:07:12 UTC
*makes note to self to stop obsessing*

Yeah, I love him, but here, soooo wanna smack him silly, well, unsilly. :)

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ohh_eris March 28 2012, 14:50:00 UTC
I can't breathe. Oh my god. I want to, need to know more backstory on Mars and Jadeite's relationship, the proposal. In a way this reminds me of apsara's Panchali fic, except this interlude won't have a happy ending :(

As much as I want to strangle Kunzite for being so ice cold I admire his complete dedication to his duty, how he can just shut aside everything and everyone else. I really love the pacing of this.

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:20:18 UTC
Apsara's fic is so, so fantastic. I love how she writes Mars and Jadeite, her Mars is so poised and her Jadeite so clever.

Thank you for your wonderful comment, I really appreciate it!

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ellorgast March 28 2012, 18:33:36 UTC
So be it.

aaaaaaaaa

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

This hurts, Lytton. It hurts so much!

He's willing to kill Nephrite for it. Of course, yes, he's Kunzite--if Endymion is in danger, he will kill anybody he has to. But this isn't even necessarily an immediate threat to Endy. This is like... a threat of a threat of danger. But for him, that's still enough ( ... )

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:23:33 UTC
This hurts, Lytton. It hurts so much!>/i>
If it helps (I have a feeling it won't), it hurts Kunzite too. He'd do it, but he wouldn't like it one bit and I don't think he'd recover from it.

But I really do believe that there is nothing Kunzite wouldn't do for Endymion, absolutely nothing at all. He'd do all the dirty work that comes with protecting someone, even if it means killing a beloved friend and brother-in-arms.

Especially after seeing Takeshi's isolated life, and how desperately he needed his men back. Especially Hiro. OMG, Hiro. All of this makes that friendship SO much more important.
Takeshi needs his friends because he never ever wants to become like Kunzite again. And without them, he would. Will. Would.

Spirit, your comments are always the loveliest things to look at.

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ARGH YOU SUCK venusorbit1 March 28 2012, 19:27:12 UTC
Of course he wanted to marry her, but he was a realist, and as such had never held any illusions as to where this relationship was going. Never down the aisle. She was his secret, one he guarded jealously, and Venus had to know that. Marriage, for them, had never been on the cards.

BECAUSE OF THIS, MISS LYTTON, KEVIN AND MINA WILL HAVE THE MOST OVERBLOWN FREAKING WEDDING IN HISTORY. THERE WILL BE ICE SCULPTURES. THALIA WILL MAKE A POLYVORE. I HAVEN'T EVEN READ PAST THIS YET AND YOU ARE BREAKING MY HEART. AAAAAAAA

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Re: ARGH YOU SUCK lovelylytton April 11 2012, 21:03:43 UTC
You say that as if I object to Mina's and Kevin's most overblown wedding in the history of weddings. Alas, I do not. He called her a stripper and she ignored his calls for months and I WANT THEM TO BE HAPPY. Make them happy, V, make them happy. Oh, and give them really good wedding cake. From Harrods. You know you want to.

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Re: ARGH YOU SUCK venusorbit1 April 13 2012, 20:04:07 UTC
HARRODS MAKES WEDDING CAKES??????

SOMEONE CONFIRM THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: ARGH YOU SUCK lovelylytton April 13 2012, 21:52:07 UTC
In the cake hall. Have you never seen them? They are encased by glass and things of beauty. And also, costs as much as a car, but hey - Kevin is LOADED, so get them on a plane!

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charliechaplin2 March 28 2012, 19:39:15 UTC
Forget sleep. We need to talk now ( ... )

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:25:14 UTC
The only reason he is so scary is because you were such a great help plotting this. I mean it, without you, he'd be almost puppies and rainbows and sunshine. The ruthlessness gives him his edge, and I don't think I would have quite gotten there without your most excellent input.

In sum: thank you for being awesome!

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