Comments | lovelyzelda: "Times Change"--Second part

lovelyzelda

"Times Change"--Second part

Jul 19, 2011 13:34

Just in case you were wondering, LJ still has character limits.

Part One here.

( Times Change 2 )

Comments 5

shagungu July 20 2011, 17:57:37 UTC

I always love how you have McCoy tease Spock.
Great to read about my OT3.

lovelyzelda July 21 2011, 05:08:16 UTC

Thanks!

dirty_diana August 1 2011, 20:38:58 UTC

This is a gorgeous story. I love how clearly drawn Thelin is as a character, and the lovely effect of all the compare and contrast moments. I especially love how good you are here at showing that the characters that aren't human, well, aren't human, and using the interesting moments of the different cultures without ending up with a colonial-style "humans do it best" vibe.

Also, the interaction between all the boys! And Jim trying to be inclusive. Lovely job.

lovelyzelda August 6 2011, 04:33:09 UTC

Thank you!

I think realizing just how different humans would be to Thelin than to Spock helped. I think that was around the time when I realized that I should not be using binary pronouns for Andorians when writing from Thelin's point of view--but that full internal focalization would just be a complete nightmare for me and my human readers.

anonymous February 28 2017, 03:08:37 UTC

This is a fascinating fic!