Comments | lovinglaura01: Matchmakers: (Ch 5) Takin' Care of Business

lovinglaura01

Matchmakers: (Ch 5) Takin' Care of Business

Jul 24, 2009 11:49

Title; Matchmakers
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Peter/Claire and a lot more
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes
Author’s notes: This takes place after Vol. 3, but Peter does not have that one power at a time thing because I don’t like it! Also, fugitives never happened so forget about it! Thanks to Arinna, Mel, Alex, Lauren, and Beth for letting me use them ( Read more... )

fanfic, peter, paire, matchmakers, claire

Comments 9

anonymous July 25 2009, 19:58:11 UTC

I absolutely loved this chapter! I almost fainted when Claire kissed Peter (even if it was just a peck on the cheek) and how sweet of him to make breakfast for his lover. Oops! I mean "niece." And once again, 'Laura' kicked butt! Love her/you!Okay, don't want to spoil anything but I THINK I know where you're going with this. Laura having empathy like Peter, dreams kind of like Angela, and flying like Nathan makes me wonder... Hmmm... Anyways can't wait for the next chapter. What's Angela and Lauren's next move? And Alex's? When are we going to see more of Mel and Arinna? Will Beth ever aquire an ability of her own and will she get more bonding time with her father? What will Laura think of Peter and Claire now that she knows they're related? Most importanly, when are Peter and Claire finally going to get it on? Ack, so many questions I hope will be answered shortly. Amazing job Laura!

~Salina~

desendn2madness July 26 2009, 08:00:39 UTC

Yay! Peter has to kill Angela!!!!!

electrifiedpie July 28 2009, 01:43:37 UTC

alex is a bitchhhhhhhhhhhhh and angela arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

but anyway i love how u write how peter feels about claire and i love laura haha awesome chapter&hearts

lovinglaura01 July 28 2009, 01:51:10 UTC

aww, thanks so much <3

44excalibur August 8 2009, 02:20:13 UTC

I loved this chapter! I wanted to leave a longer review, but I hope this one at least posts.

44excalibur August 8 2009, 02:30:33 UTC

Another great chapter with very well-written dialogue between the characters. Claire may not be ready to take Peter back, but letting him sleep on her couch is a step in the right direction. Laura is less than pleased about Claire's decision as she still considers Peter a deadbeat dad, but Claire astutely points out that Peter would not even be there if Laura had not sought him out, and that her life and her family are none of Laura's business.