Comments | lozziecap: 1984.

lozziecap

1984.

Apr 06, 2009 12:12

This is the third part of the thing that started with "WILD HORSES" and moved on to "CHOPSTICKS"

It's a classic case of something that I started and then got distracted from, and then over-thought it, and now I don't really like it any more :(

But I feel that if I get it posted, that would allow me to move on from it. I'll wait now for the new ( Read more... )

Comments 11

bast2 April 6 2009, 12:36:36 UTC

I like the Orwellian theme in this; it is intriguing, and I'd like to read more. However, I do object to the phrase: pillow of his more than capable chest. No man's chest is like a pillow, unless he is mega fat. Goren hasn't got there quite yet.

lozziecap April 6 2009, 13:36:45 UTC

Oh, er ... sorry you didn't like that line. I was thinking about my husband's chest which - like Goren's - has a reasonable amount of pectoral muscle on it, underpinned by a lil' bit of a belly, and to my head, it certainly feels very pillow-like. As in, comfortable.

ladyjudithanne April 6 2009, 12:59:49 UTC

i would think his chest is more like a pillow than a skinny man and i for one would'nt mind trying it out. i hate it when you writers put him with eames or any other woman. he's MINE all MINE!!!! just my thing, i'm sorry.may be i need to see a council or someone about this. please advice.x

lozziecap April 6 2009, 13:37:34 UTC

I'm just about to do a post on ... oh, I'll find somewhere for it, I guess, on how to tell if you are addicted to Criminal Intent. I think you are exhibiting classic symptoms :-D

ladyjudithanne April 6 2009, 15:11:29 UTC

then i need help!!!!

squarey April 6 2009, 13:18:42 UTC

I enjoy reading Rodgers fiction. I adore watching L&O and seeing her cross over to the various versions (well, mothership mainly). This is definitely a missing scene. Rodgers sold him out with the info then had his back on the explosion in the morgue. Though, perhaps sold him out is too strong a word. There are no confidences in the work place, so if Bobby had really wanted to keep things private he wouldn't have gone to Rodgers. That was his risk, and it was her job.

lozziecap April 6 2009, 13:40:12 UTC

Looking back on this very irritating piece of fic, I think I should have just written the Rodgers bit and left all the Orwell stuff for something else. They're, like, two totally different topics.

You know my take on the Goren/Rodgers thing? I think that once, maybe twenty or so years ago, they had a relationship. Maybe THAT'S why he thought he could trust her. Also, Goren had no way of knowing, when he asked her to run the tests for him, that he was on the verge of being investigated for his brother's murder...

ladyjudithanne April 6 2009, 15:17:07 UTC

i liked the orwell bit. i could see bobby thinking something like that.x just keep him away from these women! he's MINE all MINE! I DO NEED HELP!!!x

lozziecap April 7 2009, 12:29:30 UTC

I liked the Orwell bit too. Goren is forever invading people's privacy, and in "Frame", he had a serious taste of his own medicine, with Eames and Ross picking his private life to pieces. I just wondered how that made him feel?

ladyjudithanne April 7 2009, 13:52:59 UTC

he would have hated it!

justanotherfic April 8 2009, 21:04:13 UTC

Orwell!! :D 1984 is one of my favourite books, ever. I really like the way you make it work in the story.

What I like the most though, I think, is the bit with Rodgers. It is very Rodgers! Also, she really shouldn't have done what she did in Frame and I'm curious to see how he handles the situation when he's not blinded by anger. I like the thoughts you plant in my head on that matter. :)