[fic] Morimoto x Chinen - I Wanna Make You Close Your Eyes [oneshot]

[lrigelbbub]

Title: I Wanna Make You Close Your Eyes
Author: BG
Pairing: Morimoto Ryutaro x Chinen Yuri
Ratings: PG
Disclaimer: I do not own them.

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Written for Chiitaro-thon 64. 5 times Chinen managed to push Ryutaro up against a wall

Comments

[aliciaswr]

Beautiful. xD

[lrigelbbub]

I'm glad you like it :)

[aoisoranohikari]

OH MY GEWD!!!! I LOVE CHINEN-SEME VERY MUCH!! XDD *two thumbs up*

[lrigelbbub]

Thanks heaps for reading. I'm glad you like it :)

[lovetoosweet]

Ryutaro kind of wants to die.
When I first read this, I thought that, "Ah, I must quote." Plain win? <3

“I want you to keep looking only at me.”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Okay, not enough
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

“This is mine.” Another kiss was pressed against his lips.
seme!Chinen is AMAZING. I haven't read him seme for a long time :)

Thank you for posting and sorry for the quoting :)

[lrigelbbub]

Thanks for reading:)
I seem unable to make Chinen anything else but a brat or an attention whore. In all my Chinen fics he's portrayed in a similar fashion :(

I'm glad you liked it.

omg I think I love you

[charag]

Absolutely lovely fic. And you spelled naïve properly :o with diaeresis and everything!

Is it sad that that impresses me? :/

Re: omg I think I love you

[lrigelbbub]

I'm glad that you liked it :)
Ah...considering all the other typos T_T .... I guess that at least is cause for celebration :)

[anilee0510]

Ah~ I love this, it's so beautifully well written <3

Chinen was being such a tease with the cheek brushing XD

I am amazed at seme!Chinen, since I can't seem to write him at all D:

All those moments over the years and culminated into this singular moment.
Had to quote, I love this line and all the implications it holds

[lrigelbbub]

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you like it.
Ah~ seme!Chinen... I never really realised it but I kind of write him like that a lot. I nearly always write from Morimoto's perspective and Chinen is always an attention whoare or something of the like.

>>typo in the line has now been fixed. I swear I read through it before I post ;_;
Thanks again

[anilee0510]

It's a good balance to have some seme!Chinen and some seme!Ryutaro XD Yeah, that is true, I've noticed that in other Chiitaro fics you wrote. But you write it so well <3

haha, at least you correct the typos, I'm always too lazy to go back and edit it even if I find an error