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luchia13

Fic: Right Of Conquest (1/2)

Jul 02, 2009 00:10

Why two posts? Because this has such an obvious break, with even the point of view changing in the second half, that this works a lot better.

Title: Right of Conquest
Rating: PG-13
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Castiel, hints of Castiel/Lucifer.
Warnings: Evil/good/evil, temptation, Hell, boys kissing, torture, a different take on Castiel's pony, ( Read more... )

supernatural, fic

Comments 44

ibroketuesday July 2 2009, 09:09:15 UTC

This was incredible. I love this take on Lucifer and the Castiel/Lucifer relationship, and it's really interesting to see Castiel seduced in this manner, with such a realistic slide away from his certainty of Lucifer's evil - I'm intrigued about where this is going.

Bonus points for Castiel whump! Though I feel terrible about Jimmy. :(

luchia13 July 2 2009, 19:54:31 UTC

YAY! I am so very very happy you liked it and that the uncertainty works for you.

AND POOR, POOR JIMMY. I feel like I need to add a bit more about what else they did to the poor baby. I think Dean (and John) got off relatively easy, considering they actually needed him for something.

fannishliss July 2 2009, 11:10:43 UTC

beautifully written. Very nice Lucifer. I hope he is trustworthy.... of course it is very difficult not to suspect that he is not trustworthy!

I like Dean and Castiel's relationship...

and I really like your characterization of Sam. He stands out as himself in this piece.

Looking forward to more!

luchia13 July 2 2009, 19:58:21 UTC

Really, this is the beauty of writing Lucifer before we know anything about him in Supernatural other than that he's out of hell. He's the devil because they said he is, and it's soooo fun to work with that. And I'm glad you like Sam!

More to come very, very soon. ♥

architeuthis July 2 2009, 11:22:20 UTC

This is interesting and troubling and sharply written. I'm very much looking forward to part two.

luchia13 July 2 2009, 21:31:41 UTC

You called it almost every adjective I was aiming for. That makes me very, very happy. And part two is coming soon, never fear!

safa56bmc July 2 2009, 14:42:32 UTC

wow!!! to see lucifer from that point of view,and his relation ship with cas..wow..incredible..

luchia13 July 2 2009, 21:32:56 UTC

Thank you! I enjoy twisting things around.

safa56bmc July 2 2009, 21:42:27 UTC

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luchia13 July 2 2009, 22:14:29 UTC

No idea whatsoever, I'm sorry to say. But if you find it feel free to come back and link me.

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akanichiyoubi July 2 2009, 14:51:11 UTC

The second the white horse began to start becoming free I knew she was Conquest, or rather, Castiel is, and that is just AWESOME. I look forward to who the other horsemen might be. I am totally with Lucifer in this version. We'll have to wait and see if Castiel made the right decision. ;-)

luchia13 July 2 2009, 21:38:00 UTC

I WANT TO SAY OTHER THINGS TO YOU BUT I CAN'T BECAUSE THE SECOND PART ISN'T POSTED YET. This is why I usually write it all out and post it in one go, woe.

But. Um. THINGS WILL BE INTERESTING, and I hope you will enjoy the answers to your musings, and I'm glad you like it!