Fic: Right of Conquest (2/2)

Jul 05, 2009 22:01

I have a whoooole lotta after-notes for this fic, but I'm already pushing the character limit, SO! Yay fic!

Title: Right of Conquest
Rating: NC-17 (yes, I wrote porn)
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Castiel, hints of Castiel/Lucifer.
Warnings: Evil/good/evil, temptation, Hell, boys kissing (AND MORE NOW!), torture, a different take on Castiel's pony, ( Read more... )

supernatural, fic

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c00kie July 6 2009, 05:11:15 UTC
This is great! I love the inclusion of Bela as famine. I was scared that they were going to continue to follow Lucifer and poor Dean was going to have to figure out how to save the world on his own. Of course Dean is the real lord of the four horsemen. He's the one with the connection to all four of the riders, not Lucifer. Of course you know this already, seeing as you wrote it. :)

The ring part is adorable.

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luchia13 July 6 2009, 21:28:58 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! And I'm still not quite sure how Bela became Famine in my head. I was trying to think who it would be, wrote Melas, realized he had some seriously bejeweled tack, and then Bela dismounted and started explaining herself and I just sort of went with it. So yes, I wrote it, but it managed to surprise me too.

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ladyyueh July 6 2009, 05:59:34 UTC
Oh, oh, oh, awesome.

Sorry, that's about as coherent as I'm going to get.

I love that there wasn't any super-powers or whatever that made Dean the one who could stop it. He's just a normal guy as the Rider saw, but it was the love and relationships he'd cultivated that made him "the guy".

Hee! Dean got married. And it's so in character! *adores*'

You win some internets.

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luchia13 July 6 2009, 21:36:16 UTC
Hooray! *passes go, collects some internets*

I think it's kind of hilarious that the big "Dean Stops The Apocalypse Via Conquest's Crown" part would have been spoiled by about four words in Revelations. And honestly, I prefer the boys as human as they can be. Or at least Dean, what with Sam being kind of magical through the whole show. With how much supernatural stuff is around them, being normal makes them stand out.

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olympia_m July 6 2009, 06:48:52 UTC
awwwww :):)
this was fantastic! I love the whole Horsemen situation and the solution to the apocalypse problem was totally clever :):)
and the ring - :)
and Sam!
and blushing!Castiel!
and Dean-in-love...

awwwww.... :):)

fantastic :):) thank you for sharing :)

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luchia13 July 6 2009, 21:50:47 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked the crazy horsemen solution.

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juanitatequila July 6 2009, 07:11:12 UTC
That was awesome bb! The whole four horsemen thing was really interesting.

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luchia13 July 6 2009, 22:03:38 UTC
Thank you kindly! I'm glad you liked it. ♥

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ibroketuesday July 6 2009, 07:39:22 UTC
EPIC.

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luchia13 July 6 2009, 22:04:47 UTC
\o/

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